Thanks Groden! But the new formula of the second sentence have one extra character. Is it possible to remove the ''for''?:
In Super Mario World, a remix of the original Super Mario Bros. theme will play after waiting (for) 30 seconds in the Special World map screen.
Thanks a lot!
It's been a while isn't it?
I would like to know if those sentences are all right or if there is something wrong with them? ::) :
Mario Party 8 was recalled in the United Kingdom due to Kamek saying the word "Spastic" which is considered highly offensive in the UK.
In Super...
Thanks all! That makes sens.
Now, for this one, I have 2 options, I'm not sure which one is the best...?
A) In Donkey Kong 64, musical instrument(s?) used in the intro of Banjo-Kazooie make a cameo appearance in Candy's Music Store.
B) In Donkey Kong 64, the xylophone, the banjo and the...
Thanks again Mario4Ever!
Now, for this one, I have 4 characters that I need to remove. If it is necessary, I can always remove the dot, which will makes a total of 3 extra characters. But is there any suggestions to make this fact shorter? :
In Luigi's Mansion, Luigi has a Game Boy Horror...
Perfect! Thanks :)
And for that one, the underlined words are the ones I'm not sure... Can someone tell me if it is the right choice? :
In SSB Brawl, Wario has two outfits with six color choices for each, making him the character with the most alternative costumes in the game.
It's me again! Can someone tell me if those sentences are all right? How would you say that in a better way?
The illustration on the Japanese boxart of Super Mario Bros. on the famicom was drawn by Shigeru Miyamoto himself.
In the Japanese version of Super Mario World, Lemmys castle has 300...
That makes sens! Thanks!
And is this sentence all right? :
Some treasures found in Wario Land II such as the Flute, the Rupee and the Power Glove come from The Legend of Zelda: A Link to the Past.
Thanks a lot gentleman!
And for this one, does eveybody know what is a medal game (because I don't)... Is there anything wrong in that?:
Konami, the company that has made Dance Dance Revolution: Mario Mix, previously made Mario Roulette, an obscure Japan-only medal game.
Edit :
And is this sentence all right?
The Goomba House shows up on every single board of Mario Party 2. The player cant access it or interact with it. Its simply there.
Yes! Thanks! That makes sens. :D
Now, here another problem, I would like to know wich sentence is the best:
A) In Mario Party 6, two Snow Bunnies can be seen sitting near the top of the Snowflake Lake board. They originate from Paper Mario: TTYD.
And for this one, do I need to say ''those''...
Merci beaucoup! C'est vraiment apprécié! :P
Now, this sentence was really hard to write under 400 caracters. This sentence has 397 characters but I'm not sure if the underlined segment can be said...? :
Only three Fire Bros. appear in SMB3: two of them are guarding the warp whistle in World...
Thanks a lot for your help! Now, I think this sentence is all right but I just need someone to confirm me if it is (or not)!:
The game photo montage in the center of the 2006 Nintendo Monopoly board includes a picture from the protoype version of Super Mario 64.
Good idea! Thanks a lot!
Now, for this one, is there anything wrong? Does it make sens? Which one is the best?:
A) In Scribblenauts, if the player types "Weegee", a plumber will appear, referencing the internet meme about Luigi from Mario is Missing!(PC).
B) In Scribblenauts, if the player...
Thanks again!
And do anyone see something wrong in this sentence? Or is it all right?:
Among the 18 launch titles games for the NES in North America, Donkey Kong Jr. Math was the worst selling of them.
Thanks for your help! I've just added a little something to the sentence. Does it makes sens?:
A robot from the Super Team, first seen in Super Mario Strikers, makes a cameo appearance in the credits of Mario Strikers Charged.
Thank you very much! Now I am hesitant, I found this sentence repetitive and I don't know how to say that properly in English:
In Mario Strikers Charged, a robot from (of the?) the Super Team from Super Mario Strikcers makes a cameo appearance in the game's credits.
Can someone help me?
Thanks! And can someone tell me ifthis sentence is all right?:
Oddly, in bonus rooms of Super Mario World, if the player hits a block on the left side with the cape, it will always be a "O".
Thanks! and would you say :
A) In Super Mario World, the green block with a white star on it (Bonus Block) gives the player a 1-up if 30 coins were collected in the level.
B) In Super Mario World, the green block with a white star on it (Bonus Block) gives the player a 1-up if 30 coins have...
Cool! Thanks! And which version of these sentences do you prefer?:
A) The street outside of the office of Nintendo's distributor in Sweden was renamed "Marios gata".
B) The street in which the Sweden office of Nintendo's distributor is located was renamed "Marios gata".
And is the anything...
Thaks al!
And now, I would like to know if this sentence all right or if there is something wrong in it?:
In Mario Kart Wii, SNES Mario Circuit 3 and N64 DK's Jungle Parkway are the only two courses in which it is impossible to do tricks on.
Thanks Virtua Dino!
Now, for this one, is it possible to put an 's' on 'ones'? Is this sentence right?:
The European version of Mario Golf 64 has a different intro theme than the American and Japanese ones.
Hehe! Thanks a lot!
Now, I' not sur which word should I use for this:
In the Super Mario All-Stars remake of Super Mario Bros. 3, three coins were added in (to?) World 2-2.
In the ending cutscene of Mario Super Sluggers, when Wario and Waluigi are falling from the sky, the Γ on Waluigi's cap is horizontally flipped.
Thanks! Unfortunately, this sentence is 4 characters too long for Twitter. (144/140) Do you think there is a word meaning ''horizontally flipped or do...
Oh yeah! I did not see that! Thanks!
I have another one here:
During the ending cutscene of Mario Super Sluggers, when Wario and Waluigi are falling of the sky, the "Γ" in Waluigi's cap is mirrored.
Is there anything wrong in that?
Hey it's me again! Thanks again for your help!
I would like to know if there is something wrong with this sentence?:
In the Super Mario All-Stars remake of SMB2(USA), red Bezzos became yellow while the gray and green Beezos became red.
Thanks!
Yipee! Thanks again! And now, is there anything wrong in this?:
Unlike previous Mario role-playing games, Bowser does not have any lines of dialogue at all in Paper Mario: Sticker Star.
Ok thanks! So is it okay ?:
In Super Mario Advance, in addition to Mario and Luigi, Charles Martinet voices Wart, Clawgrip, Tryclyde, Fryguy and Mouser.
Cool! Thanks :) ... Now I would like to know which verb should I use in this sentence ? Or how can I say that correctly? :
In Super Mario Advance, in addition to Mario and Luigi, Charles Martinet do the voices for Wart, Clawgrip, Tryclyde, Fryguy and Mouser.
Ok! Thanks! What do you think about this version?
On the file select screen of Banjo-Kazooie, the sound effects coming from the Game Boy played by Banjo on file 3 are from Donkey Kong Land.
Yes! Ok, thanks all!
Can anyone confirms me if there is something wronf or if it is correct? :
In the file select screen of Banjo-Kazooie, the sound effects that are coming from the Game Boy played by Banjo are from Donkey Kong Land.
Yes! It works! Thanks again ;D
For this one, I would like to know if I should use 'on' or 'in' ?
Mt. Lavalava is a volcano on chapter 5 in Paper Mario and Mt. Lava Lava is the third level of the Wiggly Wilds in Wario Land: Shake It!
Cool :p Thanks!
And now, this one is a little bit tough because I need to say all that in less than 140 caracters. This has 139, but I'm not sur if the begining of the sentence makes sense:
In a USA Today interview, Miyamoto has said that Super Mario World was rushed in order to more...
Ok! Thanks! I reformulated it, do you think it is better like this? :
According to Toshihiko Nakago, the P in P-Wing stands for Paratroopa or Patapata, which is his Japanese name.
Ok, that's what I hoped! Thanks again :p
And for this one, I'm not sure about the ending of the sentence. I don't know how to formulate it so it can be more clear:
According to Toshihiko Nakago, the P in P-Wing stands for Paratroopa (And also for Patapata, the japanese name for Paratroopa).
Okay! Thanks a lot to you!
And now, I would like to know if I need to write the word 'was' in this sentence or is it to remove?
Diddy Kong (was) originally designed to be Donkey Kong Jr. by Rare but Nintendo felt Rares redesign for the ape was too extreme.
Ok thanks! But there is only a little problem, it is 5 letters too long for the Twitter limit characters :-[
So I tried to reformulate the sentence, but I'm not sure when to use ''the''. Can someone help me?
In (the) Imaginationland episodes of South Park, Mario, Wario, and Bowser can...
Thanks again! And do you tjink this sentence is okay?:
In several shots of the Imaginationland episodes of South Park, Mario, Wario, and Bowser can be seen among the residents of Imaginationland.
Oh yeah! You're righ about the comma. Thanks again! Very appreciated. I have another one!
In Super Mario World, Bony Beetles and Dry Bones have red feet, but those showed in the credits cutscene for the game had blue feet.
Does the word ''those'' is appropriated? Is the sentence all right?
Ok! Thanks ;)
And now, can someone tell me what is the difference between this? And is the anything wrong on this sentence?
For reasons unknown, the sound effect for when the Crystal King clones himself was changed in the Virtual Console version of Paper Mario,
For unknown reasons, the sound...
OK thanks! But, unfortunateley, Twitter cannot italicuze words! But now it's ok!
Now, I'm not sure in this sentence is understable? Which one is the best?
In Super Mario Bros. 2 (USA), Pink Shy-Guys patrol a ledge, while Red Shy-Guys continue to move in a straight line regardless.
In Super...
Thanks a lot! Now, I'm not sure about the '' 's ''... Does it make sens?
In the Super Mario Kart's instruction manual, the picture for Mario Circuit 1 is upside down.
And is it :
There are a total of 104 visible Question Blocks in Super Mario Bros.
or
There is a total of 104 visible Question Blocks in Super Mario Bros.
Thanks a lot! Now, which one is better ? :
In the SMAS version of SMB, you can't pause with controller one when player two is playing. This was possible in the NES version of the game.
In the SMAS version of SMB, you can't pause with controller one when player two is playing, which was...
Okay! Thanks a lot! And now, is this well formed?:
Super Mario Spikers is a cancelled Wii sports game that was developed by Next Level Games, It was a mixture of volleyball and wrestling.
Yohoo!
And now... Which one is the best ? :
Dr.Mario 64 is the only Mario game to be exclusive to North America on the Nintendo 64.
Dr.Mario 64 is the only Nintendo 64 Mario game to be exclusive to North America.
Thanks a lot! Very appreciated!
For this one, I'm not sure about the end of the sentence:
Miyamoto believed "donkey" meant "stupid" in English, and assumed the name Donkey Kong would convey the sense "stupid ape".
Can someone tell me if it is okay?
Yes! Thank yoi very much!
And now, how should I say that? In french, we would say : «La grosse dame qui est la surveillante du Boom Boom Bar...» But in english, I'm not sure of how to say that... Maybe can you help me?
Big Bertha, the large woman who is the bouncer of the Boom Boom Bar in the...