Finally, a new page for Peach's & Bowser's first Intro and HERE IT IS. . .
Need reactions to the new page, If you can't read my comic page here, go to my first post of this Topic and click "Page 6" of the Peach & Bowser first intro.
GOT A NEW PAGE UPDATE!! HERE IT IS!! ;D
Click the Page 5 link on my first post of the topc in Peach & Bowser's Intro for a full size.
Critiques and Criticism Please.
Okay, I modified my first post of the Topic and I also Added a new page for Peach and Bowser's Beginning Intro. Here it is:
Click the Page four link of the Peach and Bowser's 1st Intro if you want to see the enlarged version.
Any C+C on the new Page?
Few Changes:
& of course a preview for the Team Pauline Chapter 1 of New Donk City, Metro Kingdom, Pok'eball Nations:
Hint: this could be the reason how Pauline became Mayor.
Well I already know what those Hammer Bros who wear chef's hats and throw Frying pans are since my first time making the Fanmade Illustrated Chapterbook "Super Pauline: the First Adventure in Pok'eball Federation" when Villain Dr. Viktor von Houndoom (One of Bowser's Minions) summoned a few of...
Yeah, I know and the reason why I put "?????" on the Female rabbit boss is because she's canon from the Game and Neither of the Canon Rabbit Boss's Names are to be shown until the game is released or that the Rabbit Bosses are Previewed some more.
I sadly didn't want kids to read MY Fan Comics unless they are like 13 and up. Also, what about Horace Calling Harriet a "Pig" just because she works for the police?
That Blue Guy is actually Peach's Brother from My Mario and Friends Comics named Count Cosmo Toadstool on Deviant. I'm alot sure this Fan Comic is half Different than Super Mario Odyssey Game Itself where Mario Rescues Peach alone then with the Mushroom Knights in the Comic Chapter Book Version.
I'm waiting For somebody who can Critique on my Fan Made Comic Super Mario Odyssey. This Comic's Rated K-13+
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Howdy Ho, Everybody! The Roxbinator is in the House
Hi! The Name's Harold Roxby, Owner of the online Fancomic Studio on Deviantart known as Toon King 2 Studios (Aka Toonking2.Deviantart.com). Yeah. I'm a Crossover Fan, But mostly a Mario, Sonic and Pac-Man fan This is why I'm joining the Mario...