Let's see your mad haiku skills!

[Krizzy]

(alternate title: Rate the User Above's HAIKU!)

Write a haiku, or a series of haiku, and the person belows rates them, then writes more, &c.

Since there seems to be some confusion over what haiku is, let's leave it at just five syllables, then seven, then five. Like so.

Haiku's what this is.
Five, seven, then five again.
Perfectly even.

 

[Garlic Man]

Re: Let's see you mad haiku skills!

We just made a thread
Equally as poetic
Over at Xephyr

 

[Krizzy]

Re: Let's see you mad haiku skills!

8.4/10

Oh, well, does that make
you happy, Pres. Iwata?
If it does, well, good.

 

[Garlic Man]

Re: Let's see you mad haiku skills!

We were rating them?
I didn't even see that part
I'm too lazy to.


Oh and yours sucks. Need more commas?

 

[Garlic Man]

Re: Let's see you mad haiku skills!

In fact the title
Doesn't make a bit of sense
lrn2use grammar

 

[Gumball Machine]

You double posted.
Shame on you. Follow the rules.
That is all, good day.

We were rating them?
I didn't even see that part
I'm too lazy to.


Oh and yours sucks. Need more commas?

In fact the title
Doesn't make a bit of sense
lrn2use grammar

Not very nice, but you had the 5 7 5 syllables rule, so 7/10.

 

[Koopayoshi]

Quote (curse my noobyness!)
You double posted.
Shame on you. Follow the rules.
That is all, good day.
It has to be about grammer