Why you shouldn't ask Bowser for a raise No.2Out of the ashs

[Storm Yoshi]

No.2 of my series is here!

 

[[ohgodpleasedelete]]

Not that good, I must say. I find the plot to be lacking. Also, I wouldn't make a new thread for each comic. Just edit your old one. Seriously.

 

[Storm Yoshi]

Not that good, I must say. I find the plot to be lacking. Also, I wouldn't make a new thread for each comic. Just edit your old one. Seriously.

ok and thats the plot so far! And this only my 4th comic! The other 3 were the 2 SSB ones and the first one of this series.

 

[3Dejong]

DUMB

Sorry, but it's true.

Plus, the blue text is near-impossible to read.

 

[[ohgodpleasedelete]]

Not that good, I must say. I find the plot to be lacking. Also, I wouldn't make a new thread for each comic. Just edit your old one. Seriously.

ok and thats the plot so far! And this only my 4th comic! The other 3 were the 2 SSB ones and the first one of this series.

Ummm... I found the other ones to be bad, also.

ANNOUNCMENT: MY NONEXSISTENT COMIC WILL STAY THAT WAY UNTIL I THINK OF A PLOT.

=3

 

[Storm Yoshi]

U have to see the 1st one for this to make sense and its only a 4th attempt at a comic cos I can't get any good ideas!

 

[3Dejong]

Not that good, I must say. I find the plot to be lacking. Also, I wouldn't make a new thread for each comic. Just edit your old one. Seriously.

ok and thats the plot so far! And this only my 4th comic! The other 3 were the 2 SSB ones and the first one of this series.

Ummm... I found the other ones to be bad, also.

ANNOUNCMENT: MY NONEXSISTENT COMIC WILL STAY THAT WAY UNTIL I THINK OF A PLOT.

=3

I save the world.

END OF STORY

:twisted:

 

[Dodoman]

Serious issues with this comic (to name a few):
*Hammer's Bro's blue text is barely legible.
*Hammer Bro says "Let's get the potions!" And so, they grab mushrooms. >_>
*Bowser is doing what in the last panel? Just floating around?

 

[Storm Yoshi]

Serious issues with this comic (to name a few):
*Hammer's Bro's blue text is barely legible.
*Hammer Bro says "Let's get the potions!" And so, they grab mushrooms. >_>
*Bowser is doing what in the last panel? Just floating around?

Um you can't see them properly but there mushrooms on black bottles with corks I should've made them red. I can make comics but i just never get good ideas.

 

[Smiddle]

I don't get the plot.

 

[Storm Yoshi]

I don't get the plot.

There gonna kill everyone but after these non-constructive criticsism comments I'm not continuing it

 

[Black Ninjakoopa]

I like it.

 

[[ohgodpleasedelete]]

I don't get the plot.

There gonna kill everyone but after these non-constructive criticsism comments I'm not continuing it

We gave constructive critisism. You just kept saying "It's my 4th time! Cut me some slack."