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YoshiMonsta

YoshiMonsta

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Story Title:

MUSHROOM KINGDOM MYSTERY

Hey I've seen a ton of story signups..... and I making my own! No userpedia necessary!
It is a crime seen, there are three detectives, 7 suspects and 2 working together criminals and 2 people on the scene .

Say which you want to be and I will decide if you Make it

Narrator
YoshiMonsta

Detectives
LuigiBandicoot
Mariorulz25
Vinnie

Suspects
Epic Nitwit
Toad85
PandaPowah
Lily
PTR
CharizardLover
Gengar

Criminals
Known
Known

People on the scene (interviewed)
Nabber
Crakin355

Your form should be
Name:
Species:
Part (Criminal/Detective/etc.):
Phrase (that your sure you want him to say):
Personality:
Home town:
 
Uh, you basically just ripped off me. my New Sherlock Mario has been running for over a year, and there are way to many similarities

Mine, 3 detectives, yours, three detectives

I mean really? Get your own original idea

Sorry, I just feel bad that someone is ripping me off.

Also BTW, don't have people sign up for criminals, beats the purpose of a mystery....
 
Look, every story has a possibility of bing bad. I'm not saying that it will neccessarily by bad.
When will the first part be out?
 
Look I didn't know it existed KK. I think that if your coming on to be a grumpy-lump the leave (unless you want to join)

Nabber said:
When will the first part be out?
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It will be out once I know the cast
 
To be fair, until he introduces some kind of gimmick or plot that differentiates his story from yours, it's still a rip-off.
Also, in a myster, you should never say that there are two criminals working together. The detectives have to figure out how many people are working together for themselves.
You also have quite a large list of characters for your first story.
 
I will help you just because you need help and I'm bored.

Name: Epic Nitwit
Species: Gorilla
Part (Criminal/Detective/etc.): Village idiot uh... criminal What do you want me to put here?
Phrase (that your sure you want him to say): Meaning, a catchphrase that I will repeatedly say in the story?
Personality: Grumpy and super duper happy
Home town: THE MOOOOOOON!!!!

But I need to know more info on what I need to do with this form.
 
I'll join if it has a title and is different enough from NSM's work.

Oh, and BTW:
YoshiMonsta said:
grumpy-lump
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Who the heck says "grumpy-lump" anymore?

NOTE: The above was intended to be a joke. Do not take this personally.
 
Oh what the heck, I'll just sign up nao.

Name: Toad Smugshroom LXXXV
Species: Toad
Part: Suspect
Phrase: What the heck is your problem, *non-proper noun*?
Personality: Snarky, smug, pensive, excellent at working peoples' minds, almost never "goofs off."
Home Town (birth): Matawan, NJ
Home Town (residence): New Wikisburgh, MW
 
Nabber's New Mystery Story

May as well.

Name: Nabber
Species: Human
Part (Criminal/Detective/etc.): I don't care.
Phrase (that your sure you want him to say): None. I don't need a catchphrase.
Personality: Paranoid, complicated, uses large words.
Home town: Macadamia Realm.

Also, some advice: If you're writing a story, you should have good spelling and grammar. I'm just saying because your first post was littered with mistakes.
 
Ok, I'll do a serious one now.

Name: Epic Nitwit
Species: Gorilla
Part (Criminal/Detective/etc.): Village idiot uh... criminal What do you want me to put here? Suspect
Phrase (that your sure you want him to say): Meaning, a catchphrase that I will repeatedly say in the story? Yahooo hoo!
Personality: Grumpy and super duper happy.
Home town: THE MOOOOOOON!!!! Winkly dinkly town.
 
Name:Dempsey
Species:A mario Look alike
Part (Criminal/Detective/etc.):Detective
Phrase (that your sure you want him to say):IM A GONNA GET YOU
Personality:sometimes a bit silly but serious about his job
Home town:Toad Town
 
Name: Sir Poshington the XVI Vinnie
Species: Human
Part (Criminal/Detective/etc.): Detective
Phrase: 8)
Personality: Awesomely awesome
Home town: Awesome land
 
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