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Contra(dictory)

also I hang out here, I guess
I don't really have a sense of rhythm or rhyme, so this is going to suck. Badly.


I've spoken to you for a month
Known you for only days
Stutter and blush when we speak
But that's how I act anyways

I think you're great, but how should I tell you?
It probably isn't something you want to hear
I mean you know what happened the night we met
and I don't want to interfere

With the life that you're leading
Happy as they say
And the secrets I've been hiding
Honesty just isn't my way

How do I tell you the truth?
It's a question I can't answer, one I'm afraid to ask
I value your company as it is and I
Really want that to last
But

Freeform writing, stupid poetry
Random outbursts of sudden negativity
I wonder why you even stay around

My feelings are quite apparent
My lies are quite transparent
Even though honesty just isn't my way

I guess I'll just sit and talk and
Call you every night and
Maybe I'll have something good to say

I know I like you, I think I love you but
You totally don't feel the same
Not that that bothers me, loneliness isn't so bad
But honesty isn't my way

So, yeah, uh. Share your songs/poems here too, I guess.
 
That's actually pretty good! ;)
 
Tabs: That's quite good. You should record it.



My producer/musician name is Diving Station, and I've made a few songs under that name and remixed one of Stooben's (his band is Solitary Confinement, you can find them here.

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Solitary Confinement - "Nobody Told You to Cry [Diving Station Remix]"

"Ithaca Ghost One"

Download
The files are rather big, since I saved them at the best audio quality I could. If it's an issue I can post .mp3 links.

Solitary Confinement - "Nobody Told You to Cry [Diving Station Remix]"

"Ithaca Ghost One"
 
These pages are stained with malice
And bleed with animosity
The screams, the terrors, the cries,
How they call out to me
These pages scribbled and scorned
Ripped and torn
Such horror and hostility
The pictures they painted
How repulsive
How gruesome
Such spite
And abnormality
Tattered and worn
Their little wings are
No capable of flying anymore
Amity is dead
Delight to despair
As life stays unfair
 
The Evil Midnight Bomber What Bombs at Midnight said:
Tabs: That's quite good. You should record it.
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You really thought so? : P

I don't have a singing voice, lol.
 
Apparently I have to write a poem for school by the end of the month. I might post it here when I'm done (but probably at least a week after I've handed it in so my teachers don't think I'm plagiarizing it).
 
-Audio Version-

Freeform writing, stupid poetry
Random outbursts of sudden negativity!
I wonder why you even stay around
My feelings are quite apparent
My lies are fucking transparent
Even though honesty isn't my way
So sometimes I just like to sit and talk and
Call you now and again and
Hope I have something intelligent to say
Not like I ever do, I'm stupid for falling in love with you
And yeah, you don't feel the same
It doesn't fucking bother me
Loneliness isn't so bad
But honesty isn't my way.
Is that what you want to fucking hear from me?
I don't know what the fuck you want, honestly!
I'm reaching my wit's end attempting to give it
Every other conversation we have is loaded with contradictory, cryptic bullshit
And I'm sure that gives you a fucking laugh
You're fucking infuriating, you're driving me insane!
Why?
Wouldn't I like to know?
Do you have an answer to this fucking conundrum?
I'm so frustrated blood's pounding in my eardrum!
Jesus fucking Christ, what do you want me to say?
I love you? I fucking hate you?
Both are probably equally true!
I'm typing with an aching hand and I'm wasting my time speaking to you
"Nobody listens to me!"
What, am I the exception that proves the rule?
I'm more than happy to be here for you, but I gotta call you out on hypocritical bullshit
I just got finished dealing with four fucking years of it!
You're a sadistic, twisted bitch
Scary and schizophrenic and utterly terrifying
But you have a sweet side and I'm stupid enough to care
You don't believe me and you don't feel the same
But I love you and I'll always be there



IMPORTANT NOTE: THIS HAS ABSOLUTELY NOTHING TO DO WITH SMILEY, YOU MORONS.
BELIEVE IT OR NOT, BUT MY LOVE LIFE ACTUALLY CONTINUED AFTER I BROKE UP WITH HER.
FUCKING GASP.
 
Travis Touchdown said:
I don't really have a sense of rhythm or rhyme, so this is going to suck. Badly.

So, yeah, uh. Share your songs/poems here too, I guess.
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Make haikus instead. It's a three lined poem that's not rhymed. The first line is 5 syllables, the second is 7 syllables, and the third is 5 syllables.
 
I've been twisting and turning-
After my heart been set to a blaze
Burning and hurting-
Love is a game
That sends you cringing, twirling, swirling-
Right into a mystical daze
Lost in love's wretch phase

You’re blind
You’re blind
Emotions can not confined!

Confined the agony that everyone’s in
The peril that out washes the ocean’s kin

Your lies
Your lies
Had hidden all these ties!

Cut them loose he says
And sweep them under the door
She’s been used more than the goddamn floor
That whore
That whore
She seeks of nothing more!
 
_ said:
I've been twisting and turning-
After my heart been set to a blaze
Burning and hurting-
Love is a game
That sends you cringing, twirling, swirling-
Right into a mystical daze
Lost in love's wretch phase

You’re blind
You’re blind
Emotions can not confined!

Confined the agony that everyone’s in
The peril that out washes the ocean’s kin

Your lies
Your lies
Had hidden all these ties!

Cut them loose he says
And sweep them under the door
She’s been used more than the goddamn floor
That whore
That whore
She seeks of nothing more!
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Travis Touchdown said:
-Audio Version-

Freeform writing, stupid poetry
Random outbursts of sudden negativity!
I wonder why you even stay around
My feelings are quite apparent
My lies are fucking transparent
Even though honesty isn't my way
So sometimes I just like to sit and talk and
Call you now and again and
Hope I have something intelligent to say
Not like I ever do, I'm stupid for falling in love with you
And yeah, you don't feel the same
It doesn't fucking bother me
Loneliness isn't so bad
But honesty isn't my way.
Is that what you want to fucking hear from me?
I don't know what the fuck you want, honestly!
I'm reaching my wit's end attempting to give it
Every other conversation we have is loaded with contradictory, cryptic bullshit
And I'm sure that gives you a fucking laugh
You're fucking infuriating, you're driving me insane!
Why?
Wouldn't I like to know?
Do you have an answer to this fucking conundrum?
I'm so frustrated blood's pounding in my eardrum!
Jesus fucking Christ, what do you want me to say?
I love you? I fucking hate you?
Both are probably equally true!
I'm typing with an aching hand and I'm wasting my time speaking to you
"Nobody listens to me!"
What, am I the exception that proves the rule?
I'm more than happy to be here for you, but I gotta call you out on hypocritical bullshit
I just got finished dealing with four fucking years of it!
You're a sadistic, twisted bitch
Scary and schizophrenic and utterly terrifying
But you have a sweet side and I'm stupid enough to care
You don't believe me and you don't feel the same
But I love you and I'll always be there
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You guys are clearly working through something. I'll come back later.




Soundcloud links for the Stoob remix and "Ithaca Ghost One" are now up, so you can listen to them online, if indeed you want to. The links have been added to my other post, but I figured I might as well post them here too:

Nobody Told You to Cry [Diving Station Remix]

"Ithaca Ghost One"
 
Death, can you describe-
Your bittersweet love for me?

You come without called-
Stealing souls gleefully-

Your smile, your grace-
My beauty and my disembodied fate-

Would you seduce me as I wither away-
So I can reside with you in Heaven's lovely stay?
 
The Evil Midnight Bomber What Bombs at Midnight said:
You guys are clearly working through something. I'll come back later.
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Uh...no. That poem has absolutely nothing to do with Smiley. :/
 
Everybody makes mistakes,
But accidents are one-time things
Repetition bores the reader, but eases the mind
Take me flying with bloody wings, I
Don't care how I get high anymore
As long as it's with you

You're a mistake I keep making
One I can't resist
You're that pretty girl with a sinister smile
And your hands on your hips

Let's make a little mistake, let's
Be one for just one night, let's
Grasp and writhe and bite and scream, let's
Get high together

Let me, replace your hands with mine
Why don't you grab a little wine, we can
Get a little tipsy tonight, and
Make a little mistake

Let's, push against and open doors, let's
Disregard those little whores, let's
Bite and moan and scream and
Let me show you what I mean

Get in bed with me tonight, I
Don't really enjoy my life, and I
Really like to please, and I
Don't have anywhere else to go

Make a mistake with me, and
Maybe repeat it a few times, and
Just pretend that we regret it

Let's tangle together and kiss and moan, let's
Grasp, bite, grind and groan, let's
Feel alive
Let's get high
 
I'm sorry I could not bring you into this world
I gave you a name, but not a good home
My poor little baby
My poor little pride
You shivered in my own two arms

Aliesenia
Why did you died?
Aliesenia
I failed before I could try
Aliesenia
My poor little girl
Aliesenia
Could I have done more?
 
Let's pretend you never stopped me
Because I choked and died the other night
The man I used to be collapsed into nothing
And ultimately, that's alright

There is nothing left to build on
No blueprints to build from
No shoulders left for me to lean on
And now, you've be gone

The old me can't live
The old me can't do this
The old me is dead
The thing I've got to do is

Build
'Cause I'm delirious
There's nothing in the future or past
Feeling ineffacious
There's no way I could've made this last

I'm saying this auspiciously
And you're squinting suspiciously

Because all I've been is just words
and that is true
The difference between us now is
I'm dead to you

I'm dead to you
but I have a long life to live

Dead but alive
Some kind of mystery
Dead but alive
A little bit contradictory
 
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