My first sprite comic

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Sorry about the size, lol.
 
I don't mean to be rude, but I couldn't quite understand the storyline.
Why were the Shy Guys happy about Kamek being pleased?
Lastly, what was that creature that was brownish-yellow?
 
The alst 2 panels is the shy guy throwing the "light saber" into yoshis mouth. the lightsaber had cut throguh yoshi, making him die.
 
isyou said:
The alst 2 panels is the shy guy throwing the "light saber" into yoshis mouth. the lightsaber had cut throguh yoshi, making him die.
And i tought i did understand the storyline...
 
It has no plot.
 
I would also like to know what FTW means.
 
It means "For the win", nothing inappropriate.
 
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