i know there is something wrong but how should i fix it(sprite art)

Thread starter Toasty Toad
Start date Jul 20, 2021

Which one looks the best

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They are an insult to my eyes pls give me unsee juice
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The beauty has no boundaries in these pictures
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Meh they look the same to me
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Toasty Toad

All toasters toast toast

Jul 20, 2021

#1

this is helpful criticism page for art and I need help for this

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Last edited: Jul 21, 2021

Toasty Toad

All toasters toast toast

Jul 21, 2021

Thread starter
#2

Can some one give me ideas on how to fix this and sorry for double posting

Kirbyo

writing for the `Shroom, saving Popstar from doom

Jul 21, 2021

#3

The tounge looks weird and the mustache is usually white.

Toasty Toad

All toasters toast toast

Jul 21, 2021

Thread starter
#4

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I think I fixed the tongue but the mustache??

Hooded Pitohui

The Bird With Batrachotoxin

Core 'Shroom Staff

Awards Committee

Poll Committee

Jul 21, 2021

#5

Maybe try an outline of dark grey around the moustache?

Toasty Toad

All toasters toast toast

Jul 21, 2021

Thread starter
#6

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