How do you make a review more substantial?

[Mount Wario]

Let's take the design of the character I have in my avatar as an example. His design seems to be based on Turkish and Ottoman objects. The fez, the scimitar, the scent bottle and the large and thick moustache and beard. He also seems to be based on a jester due to the strident colors, dwarf height, colored stripes and funny/exaggerated expression (googly looking eyes, wide mouth and very stretched eyebrows). Design is good, as colors don't clash because warm, neutral and cool colors look good when next to each other (purple stripe next to yellow stripe, red body next to white eye next to blue pupils) and so do lighter and darker parts (white beard in front of darker red body) and shapes being ordered in a big-medium-small patern (beard, bottle body and shield are the big shapes. Scimitar, arms and hat + feather are middle. rings, eyes and nose are small).

And that's that. I can't think of something else to say.

EDIT: This is just an example and not something I normally take a look at.

 

[MegaBowser64]

I mean, honestly, that's an impressive amount of content you were able to get out of your avatar, I don't think I would change much