The Story of a Goomba

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LuigiIsMe

Monty Mole
A new FANFIC.

Intro: The Goomba's escape

Once upon a time, there was a happy kingdom...
This is not one of those tales.
Actually, our kingdom of focus is not happy. It is in ruins. Bowser has finally taken over.
"Lord Bowser, we have a goomba traitor!"A Paratroopa exclaimed."He has escaped!"
"Send me his catch number."
"He has had that removed."
"DRAT! Tell all troops to look for a goomba."
"Yes sir."
The trooper flew off.
To be continued...
ITS JUST A SHORT INTRO. Im on my dsi, gonna write me a first chapter! Chapter 1: Goomba's love
"I do!" Our hero said.
"You may now kiss the bride!"
Just when their lips were about to touch...
"SHUT UP AND PUT YOUR MONEY WHERE YOUR MOUTH IS..."
Goom fell out of his bed.
[chapter 1 in construction... cuz Im working on meh dsi.]
 
I think I've seen the title used before, but anyway this looks good so far.
 
LuigiIsMe said:
Why thanks. Thought I would get insulted on the intro's short length.
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Length doesn't realy matter to me, I enjoy Hos van Hozel (A fanfic writer who make funny parody stories with Engrish) stories, which are pretty short. I focuse more on content and mood of the story when reading, rather than length.
 
I think I've heard of him.

Hmmm... I like to rush things, so once I get a good idea for Chap. 1, I'll make it. Expect it soon.
 
Jeff said:
LuigiIsMe said:
Why thanks. Thought I would get insulted on the intro's short length.
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Length doesn't realy matter to me, I enjoy Hos van Hozel (A fanfic writer who make funny parody stories with Engrish) stories, which are pretty short. I focuse more on content and mood of the story when reading, rather than length.
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He's joking? I thought he was serious.
 
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