Zero777
Middle Eastern Federation
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Re: Extinction: Rise of the Mutants
No offense, still friends.
I really want to thank you GP for criticizing my work, because I know from all this praise I can't get better and I'm not the perfect story maker at all, so I thank you.
Also the reason why you reverted to Petey form is unknown, maybe you felt like it or maybe I'm implying that the Zero Corps. technology is so advance (since the Planks are just using Zero Corps. technology) that it can even resist the power of Godzilla and give him a run for his money.
I may start working on the next chapter this weekend and it may or may not be released.
I was just trying to not make the story lose its flow. And GP, you god-mod way too much I have to say, especially on Burning GalacticPetey, "if Burning GP dies from nuclear meltdown then the whole universe will be destroyed."Lumpy Space Princess said:You have a good point, but I think he does it so one character isn't to powerfulGalacticPetey said:Zero. Small complaint here. I don't want to sound rude, but how do missiles hurt my Godzilla form? In some movies, Godzilla walks through loads of missiles, tanks, battleships, troops, electricity towers at the same time and isn't even affected. The 1998 Godzilla film with Matthew Brodirick doesn't count. That creauture is nothing like Godzilla so that's why he got killed with planes. This is friendly critism. I think your story is great. Just that small complaint.
No offense, still friends.
I really want to thank you GP for criticizing my work, because I know from all this praise I can't get better and I'm not the perfect story maker at all, so I thank you.
Also the reason why you reverted to Petey form is unknown, maybe you felt like it or maybe I'm implying that the Zero Corps. technology is so advance (since the Planks are just using Zero Corps. technology) that it can even resist the power of Godzilla and give him a run for his money.
I may start working on the next chapter this weekend and it may or may not be released.