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[Ruiji01]

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Wow that is just incredible.

Thanks!

This is amazing. It looks like Nintendo's official artwork of Daisy in the ocean/sea.

I could have imitated nintendo art style. maybve next time! and thank you!

Wow! You did such a fantastic job! The shading is great, and I love the sun beams. And they are all very cute.

Thanks a lot! glad you like it!

I think I might understand why Mason has so much trouble with the sunbeams. The problem I find with it is that Everything of the image has outlines so defined and so perfect that it's amazing, but the sunlight rays looks as if you couldn't decide if you wanted them to have outlines or not. Mabye use a white outline for the sun rays next time might make it seem more transparent and more like light then what it is.

Other than that and the way you took the image, probably one of the best drawings I have ever seen.

Well i guess that says a lot! Thank you! i`m kinda confident on this one. and as for the sunrays... i guess th white outlining sounds good. will try next time.

 

[Kyoko Sakura]

Re: I want some critics!

(ftr I thought most of the lineart was good to begin with)