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Re: The Real Life Wiki

Nice opening.
 
Re: The Real Life Wiki

King DDD said:
Who did in the ending? Do it was me?
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What?

And pretty much nobody gets promoted straight to bureaucrat.

And I'll bet you didn't read that part of the Disconnected about writing a good story.
P.S. Don't take that the wrong way.
 
Re: The Real Life Wiki

*u* I'm impressed. You are a really good fanfiction writer. :) Keep it up!
 
Re: The Real Life Wiki

Well, that part I was talking about said you shouldn't make yourself super awesome when you're just a normal user.

But you got promoted to a crat

But, you probably shouldn't have done it like that imo, so...

idk

Also, goodness so many edit conflicts.

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Ganondorf said:
Please review constructively! You can even say you hate it!
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I SMELL CONTRADICTION
 
Re: The Real Life Wiki

Not bad, it's pretty engaging actually except for the logic problems. They aren't too bad though.
 
Re: The Real Life Wiki

@Yoshiwaker: Fixed

And for Yoshidude, I'd like to have all the bios in before the first chapter. That should answer your question.
 
Re: The Real Life Wiki

the story starts with you getting promoted to 'crat?

I have a bad feeling about this
 
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