Dimensions
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Koopayoshi
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- #102
5 chapters, a bunch of parts
Zero777
Middle Eastern Federation
Prologue:
There wasn't really anything to suggest what's the story about, but it's a prologue, I could let it slide.
Chapter 1:
You, Supremo, and NSM lacked personality and motivation to go to the other dimension, I was expecting some opposition from either. The chapter went by a bit too quick and I don't see how the prologue was related to it, but I guess that can be answered later.
Chapter 1: 2.9/5
There wasn't really anything to suggest what's the story about, but it's a prologue, I could let it slide.
Chapter 1:
You, Supremo, and NSM lacked personality and motivation to go to the other dimension, I was expecting some opposition from either. The chapter went by a bit too quick and I don't see how the prologue was related to it, but I guess that can be answered later.
Chapter 1: 2.9/5
Koopayoshi
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- #106
I'm thinking about cancelling this