Four Kingdoms

Update:

I've started work on the comic, I might not decide to release it until I'm fully satisfied with it though. Which could take a long time.

Anyways rest assured I am working on it as you read this.

...

Wait, I should probably go make a Userpedia page about this.
 
Jack Noir said:
The Prologue has been released.

Go ahead and criticize any problems you see, I'll need criticism to improve if there's any problems.
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I read it before you posted that post, and I must say:

That was awesome!

The plot is great. I also love that I'm in it.

I think this is also pretty creative, using Legos for a comic. This makes readers even more interested for they have never seen something like this. As said before, I think the plot is great, and I can't wait for the next one!
 
@Dr. Javalin

Dude, you didn't put me as a character...or anybody else escept You, Supremo, Nabber and Yoshiwaker..

MODIFY: NVM...Those are the main characters

BTW: Awesome Prologue..That's how I will start to do my comics, with lego pics.. My first one will be a Halloween one...And i'll start it.
 
ADU said:
@Dr. Javalin

Dude, you didn't put me as a character...or anybody else escept You, Supremo, Nabber and Yoshiwaker..

MODIFY: NVM...Those are the main characters

BTW: Awesome Prologue..That's how I will start to do my comics, with lego pics.. My first one will be a Halloween one...And i'll start it.
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Yeah, I haven't put everyone in as a character yet because they haven't appeared. I also plan to put different things about each character like more or less what Fire Emblem class they are and stuff.
 
Cool..I'm making a Lego Comic called "The Haunt" It'll be cool.

And maybe a few months after I finish the Comic I will create the Lego Movie.
 
You all should be warned that everyone in this comic is prone to a sudden and painful death. In fact I've already planned out a storyline where someone is doomed to die.

This means that if you want to live you should be very nice to me and give me cookies

And Goomba'sShoe, even though I may not really like you at the moment you will have a very major role in this story. Just saying.

Whether or not you die is currently undecided
 
Jack Noir said:
You all should be warned that everyone in this comic is prone to a sudden and painful death. In fact I've already planned out a storyline where someone is doomed to die.

This means that if you want to live you should be very nice to me and give me cookies

And Goomba'sShoe, even though I may not really like you at the moment you will have a very major role in this story. Just saying.

Whether or not you die is currently undecided
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I'm okay with that. Dying is part of the story. (But I'd still prefer to be alive.)
Anyway, maybe it's just my computer, but the letters seemed a bit small...
 
Nabber said:
Anyway, maybe it's just my computer, but the letters seemed a bit small...
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Point your mouse at the browser window, then hold Ctrl and scroll your mouse up; it should zoom in on your browser window.

If you're using windows.
 
Jack Noir said:
You all should be warned that everyone in this comic is prone to a sudden and painful death. In fact I've already planned out a storyline where someone is doomed to die.

This means that if you want to live you should be very nice to me and give me cookies

And Goomba'sShoe, even though I may not really like you at the moment you will have a very major role in this story. Just saying.

Whether or not you die is currently undecided
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if you choose me , i want a tragic death
 
I'm saying nothing else about who dies and who doesn't.

Rarity said:
Nice comic. The font is my only complaint. I can barely read some words.
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That was one thing I was a bit worried about. Rest assured that the rest of the comics will not be in that Old English font, it was just for dramatic effect in the prologue.
 
Awesome comic, Javelin. A lot better than a lot of stuff I've seen on userpedia. The font wasn't even half bad, IMO.

Here's a cookie:

Chocolate-Chip-Cookie.jpg
 
I can outdo that cookie.
triple_double_oreo.jpg

The new Triple Double Oreo!
(They're actually selling those.)
 
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