Wikiland: Chapter Two Released

What did you think of the story so far?

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Re: Wikiland: Rise of the Prophecy (Finally got a UP page)

Nabber Simpson said:
If you want, I can be editor when he's out. I'm very good at spotting grammatical and spelling erros, and what's wrong with the chapter (was confusing, etc.)
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I'll call you when Javelin can't do the job.
 
Re: Wikiland: Rise of the Prophecy (Finally got a UP page)

Minor hero.

Also, be careful. When I tried to do a story with a prophecy, this happened.

http://userpedia.adriels.com/wiki/The_Legendary_Heroes

Don't read it. Or you'll die.

Anways...
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Name: Pyro

Personality: Clumsy and a bit idiotic. Usually clueless.

I like making myself look stupid. :lol:
 
Re: Wikiland: Rise of the Prophecy (Finally got a UP page)

Also, be careful. When I tried to do a story with a prophecy, this happened.

http://userpedia.adriels.com/wiki/The_Legendary_Heroes

Don't read it. Or you'll die.
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It doesn't look that bad.
 
Re: Wikiland: Rise of the Prophecy (Finally got a UP page)

Vlad Plasmius said:
Also, be careful. When I tried to do a story with a prophecy, this happened.

http://userpedia.adriels.com/wiki/The_Legendary_Heroes

Don't read it. Or you'll die.
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It doesn't look that bad.
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Then you haven't read the whole thing yet.
 
Re: Wikiland: Rise of the Prophecy (Finally got a UP page)

Yoshiwalker said:
Vlad Plasmius said:
Also, be careful. When I tried to do a story with a prophecy, this happened.

http://userpedia.adriels.com/wiki/The_Legendary_Heroes

Don't read it. Or you'll die.
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It doesn't look that bad.
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Then you haven't read the whole thing yet.
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Yeah, I haven't.

:-[
 
Re: Wikiland: Rise of the Prophecy (Finally got a UP page)

Vlad Plasmius said:
Also, be careful. When I tried to do a story with a prophecy, this happened.

http://userpedia.adriels.com/wiki/The_Legendary_Heroes

Don't read it. Or you'll die.
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It doesn't look that bad.
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Sure, I didn't make major mistakes.

But it was terribly cliched and I overused the prophecy idea.

That was back in May...Good times.
 
Re: Wikiland: Rise of the Prophecy (Finally got a UP page)

This is probably going to be very postponed for a while, thanks to school and my new 'Shroom role.
 
Re: Wikiland: CANCELLED (AND/OR INDEFINITELY POSTPONED)

Sorry guys, I'm cancelling this. I don't see how I'm ever going to get the time to actually write three 20-chapter stories with the schedule I currently have.

So I'll just give a brief synopsis of what would have happened.

Later.
 
Re: Wikiland: CANCELLED (AND/OR INDEFINITELY POSTPONED)

Sounds like what happened with NS. Except I never said what would happen.
 
Re: Wikiland: CANCELLED (AND/OR INDEFINITELY POSTPONED)

GLaDOS said:
Sounds like what happened with NS. Except I never said what would happen.
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Good point. NO ENDING FOR U.
 
Re: Wikiland: BACK ON, BUT POSTPONED UNTIL DECEMBER 26th AT EARLIEST.

Alright, this is back on.

Not only that, but I added some terms on the main page that you may need or want to know before reading.
 
Re: Wikiland: BACK ON, BUT POSTPONED UNTIL DECEMBER 26th AT EARLIEST.

That's great! Just make sure that the story doesn't get too troped up - and especially be careful arund acronyms.
 
Re: Wikiland: BACK ON, BUT POSTPONED UNTIL DECEMBER 26th AT EARLIEST.

GLaDOS said:
That's great! Just make sure that the story doesn't get too troped up - and especially be careful arund acronyms.
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1. I'm not planning on making it too troped up. Any overuse of tropes will be accidental, and you can tell me if it happens.
2. What's up with acronyms?
 
Re: Wikiland: BACK ON, BUT POSTPONED UNTIL DECEMBER 26th AT EARLIEST.

The W.I.K.I. Just saying. It's fine right now.
 
Re: Wikiland: BACK ON, BUT POSTPONED UNTIL DECEMBER 26th AT EARLIEST.

GLaDOS said:
The W.I.K.I. Just saying. It's fine right now.
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Oh, that. Yeah, that's a one-time acronym to explain what it meant. In-story, it's just spelled "wiki."

Also, I'll give four details about the story, none of them should really be spoilers:

1. NSM will be the primary primary hero of the story, kinda like how John was the primary primary hero of Homestuck. Sorry, Nabber and Supremo.
2. Nabber will constantly break the fourth wall in a Pinkie Pie-like manner. He will even engage in an argument with the narrator at one point. This will be played for laughs.
3. Supremo will be the last character revealed by far (at least by name). I'm thinking around Chapter 8 or 9 as opposed to NSM's Prologue, GS15's Chapter 1, Nabber's Chapter 3, Javelin's Chapter 4, and OJ and Pyro's Chapter 5.
4: The story will be 20-30 chapters long.
 
Re: Wikiland: BACK ON, BUT POSTPONED UNTIL DECEMBER 26th AT EARLIEST.

Sounds good, except that NSM is primary primary character. :p
And I like how my character sounds, I love breaking the fourth wall! (Just look and Nabberture Science, I did it like three times in five chapters.)
 
Re: Wikiland: BACK ON, BUT POSTPONED UNTIL DECEMBER 26th AT EARLIEST.

GLaDOS said:
And I like how my character sounds, I love breaking the fourth wall! (Just look and Nabberture Science, I did it like three times in five chapters.)
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That's kinda where I got it from. :P

And the only reason NSM is on top is because he was the first hero to sign up.
 
Re: Wikiland: BACK ON, BUT POSTPONED UNTIL DECEMBER 26th AT EARLIEST.

I know. Fair's fair.
 
Re: Wikiland: BACK ON, BUT POSTPONED UNTIL DECEMBER 26th AT EARLIEST.

I'll be a minor hero.

Name: Red

Personality: Bashful

Appearance: See this page's main picture

Abilities: Uses Blastoise, Charizard, Venusaur, Snorlax, Pikachu, and Espeon
 
Re: Wikiland: BACK ON, BUT POSTPONED UNTIL DECEMBER 26th AT EARLIEST.

Draft?
Anyway, this is very good. That's really all I can say, this is good writing.
 
Re: Wikiland: BACK ON, BUT POSTPONED UNTIL DECEMBER 26th AT EARLIEST.

GLaDOS said:
Draft?
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Javelin still has to edit it.

Pokémon Trainer Red said:
I'll be a minor hero.

Name: Red

Personality: Bashful

Appearance: See this page's main picture

Abilities: Uses Blastoise, Charizard, Venusaur, Snorlax, Pikachu, and Espeon
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Alright, I'll put you in!
 
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