Yoshiwaker
Star Spirit
Re: A great story
Who?Nabber Simpson said:
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Mariorules25
Hyaahhh
Re: A great story
Glowsquid i think.
Glowsquid i think.
Nintendoobsessed
Spiny
- Thread starter
- #54
Re: A great story
Your a troll!
I dont see you telling a good weve!
STOKAL
based on a true life story.
Part 9
By Nintendoobsessed
More then 30 cars were outside the school. They were scared, angry, and confused parents. 5 sets had already tried to get in, plus Sasha longfield. Mother of Susie Longfield.
I woke up in a glassy area. All around, old computers and broken robots made the strange MCP lair. I stumbled to my feet, and started walking. From somewhere, I could hear below me screaming. I picked up my pace.
So, said Mario. They said and joked that it looked like a giant with a brain for a head. Thats when the door broke open."
I kept running. Diffrent ways crossed my path. I chose certin. I finnaly started to hear screaming come from the West. I went that way getting more and more nervous at the situation.
When they found her, the first of the parents, whe was sobbing at the door, talking about children, demon children grabbing her child. The mother, tried to talk sense to her, but it didnt effect her. So they tried to get in, but the door was locked. More and more parents came. Finnaly, the father of James, hit the window. It was unbreakable. So he tried more places to break in, but it didnt work.
HUMAN INTERFERANCE? Right at the time the CEREMONY is being setup? How could this happen? Said the MCP. Well, you did realize that the parents would realize something was going on right? THIS IS NOT MY PROBLEM! Its... MCP beebed. Leader did put this in my hands. Fine! Make sure those parents are eliminated now.
I ran down the hallway. The screams were getting louder. I finally got to a giant space. I gasped.
Next Time: Hmm? Bettys return! Look for Part 10!
To be continued...
Nabber Simpson said:
Your a troll!
I dont see you telling a good weve!STOKAL
based on a true life story.
Part 9
By Nintendoobsessed
More then 30 cars were outside the school. They were scared, angry, and confused parents. 5 sets had already tried to get in, plus Sasha longfield. Mother of Susie Longfield.
I woke up in a glassy area. All around, old computers and broken robots made the strange MCP lair. I stumbled to my feet, and started walking. From somewhere, I could hear below me screaming. I picked up my pace.
So, said Mario. They said and joked that it looked like a giant with a brain for a head. Thats when the door broke open."
I kept running. Diffrent ways crossed my path. I chose certin. I finnaly started to hear screaming come from the West. I went that way getting more and more nervous at the situation.
When they found her, the first of the parents, whe was sobbing at the door, talking about children, demon children grabbing her child. The mother, tried to talk sense to her, but it didnt effect her. So they tried to get in, but the door was locked. More and more parents came. Finnaly, the father of James, hit the window. It was unbreakable. So he tried more places to break in, but it didnt work.
HUMAN INTERFERANCE? Right at the time the CEREMONY is being setup? How could this happen? Said the MCP. Well, you did realize that the parents would realize something was going on right? THIS IS NOT MY PROBLEM! Its... MCP beebed. Leader did put this in my hands. Fine! Make sure those parents are eliminated now.
I ran down the hallway. The screams were getting louder. I finally got to a giant space. I gasped.
Next Time: Hmm? Bettys return! Look for Part 10!
To be continued...
Yoshiwaker
Star Spirit
Re: A great story
I could say that calling somebody a troll for posting a story here would be considered trolling.
I could say that calling somebody a troll for posting a story here would be considered trolling.
UltraMario
Donkey Kong
Re: A great story
An administrator a troll? Sounds legit.Nabber Simpson said:
Dr. Javelin
Nathan Latsk
Re: A great story
I think the underlined bits speak for themselves.
...Nabber Simpson said:
I think the underlined bits speak for themselves.
Yoshiwaker
Star Spirit
Re: A great story
SEEMS LEGIT
No, he was calling Nintendoobsessed a troll...Pinkie Pie said:
SEEMS LEGIT
UltraMario
Donkey Kong
Re: A great story
I thought he was calling Squiddy a troll.Yoshiwalker said:
Yoshiwaker
Star Spirit
Re: A great story
Actually, uh, he said:
so... the story is a troll?
Actually, uh, he said:
Nabber Simpson said:
so... the story is a troll?
UltraMario
Donkey Kong
Re: A great story
Inanimate things can troll? Sounds legit.Yoshiwalker said:
Mariomario64
Shine Sprite
Re: A great story
seemslegit.jpg
Re: A great story
No part of this board requires it to be Mario relatedDr. Javelin said:
Mariomario64
Shine Sprite
Re: A great story
We already went over that Fan Creations doesn't have to be Mario-related.
We already went over that Fan Creations doesn't have to be Mario-related.
Koopayoshi
Shine Sprite
Re: A great story
Putting a story on the interent is trolling? Honestly, give the guy a break. He's probably some little kid trying to to go into writing.Nabber Simpson said:
Nintendoobsessed
Spiny
- Thread starter
- #68
Re: A great story
It IS Mario releted.
STOKAL
based on at true life story
10th part!
Part 10
by Nintendoobsessed
It mutterd something, and 2 hands came out of its head. It ripped off my partners heads and devoured them, Said Mario.
In the middle of the stadium was Susie. Around her were the 5th grade cyborgs, and the 2nd grade cyborgs. What are they doing? I thought. There skin touched each others. I ran to Susie who was crying. I squeezed betwwen the kids. I'm here. I said. But she kept her eyes on something behind me. What? I turned around and started running. At them. The skin had fused and they were trapping us. I kicked at the forming skin between them that ripped. We ran. We have to leave now. A brand new reason appeard. Betty smashed through the roof. Whhat? She had been...crushed.
Far away, in the forest, a hole appeard. A middle school girl crawled out. She tried to crawl more, but the preasure was too much. Its after...why didnt I realize it before? She felt the Jewl that hung around her neck. She smelled the air. They've already attacked here. It will be lucky if theres any survivors from THE CEREMONY. She grimly thought to herselve.
Questions raced in my mind as I ran. What were they doing? Are the commnity starting to notice the were gone? I ran back into the maze. I turned around. Betty through the concrete at us. She was pure iron/electronics! I ran a diffrent way. Betty followed. I hid behind a pillar; Betty stomped by. But she wasent stupid. She used her hand to smash through the hard drives that were SouthEast of her with her hand at us. I jumped, but then I realized, this was a new Betty, a STRONGER Betty. I hurried down a passage to the floor below. Giant machines galore. I dodged them and came to a room with a computer. I looked up the hall. A man who looked like he had been whiped was walking that way. Weird. I thought quickly stepping into the room.
Time is running out... The season finale is coming! Saturday!
To be continued...
Mariomario64 said:
It IS Mario releted.
STOKAL
based on at true life story
10th part!
Part 10
by Nintendoobsessed
It mutterd something, and 2 hands came out of its head. It ripped off my partners heads and devoured them, Said Mario.
In the middle of the stadium was Susie. Around her were the 5th grade cyborgs, and the 2nd grade cyborgs. What are they doing? I thought. There skin touched each others. I ran to Susie who was crying. I squeezed betwwen the kids. I'm here. I said. But she kept her eyes on something behind me. What? I turned around and started running. At them. The skin had fused and they were trapping us. I kicked at the forming skin between them that ripped. We ran. We have to leave now. A brand new reason appeard. Betty smashed through the roof. Whhat? She had been...crushed.
Far away, in the forest, a hole appeard. A middle school girl crawled out. She tried to crawl more, but the preasure was too much. Its after...why didnt I realize it before? She felt the Jewl that hung around her neck. She smelled the air. They've already attacked here. It will be lucky if theres any survivors from THE CEREMONY. She grimly thought to herselve.
Questions raced in my mind as I ran. What were they doing? Are the commnity starting to notice the were gone? I ran back into the maze. I turned around. Betty through the concrete at us. She was pure iron/electronics! I ran a diffrent way. Betty followed. I hid behind a pillar; Betty stomped by. But she wasent stupid. She used her hand to smash through the hard drives that were SouthEast of her with her hand at us. I jumped, but then I realized, this was a new Betty, a STRONGER Betty. I hurried down a passage to the floor below. Giant machines galore. I dodged them and came to a room with a computer. I looked up the hall. A man who looked like he had been whiped was walking that way. Weird. I thought quickly stepping into the room.
Time is running out... The season finale is coming! Saturday!
To be continued...
Yoshiwaker
Star Spirit
Re: A great story
WHAT.Nabber Simpson said:
Yoshiwaker
Star Spirit
Re: A great story
Intentionally bad works would probably be parodies.
So the people who make them would be... parodists? IDK
But a troll is a person who intentionally starts fights on the internet.
Intentionally bad works would probably be parodies.
So the people who make them would be... parodists? IDK
But a troll is a person who intentionally starts fights on the internet.
Mariorules25
Hyaahhh
Re: A great story
Yeah
Yoshiwalker said:
Yeah
Nintendoobsessed
Spiny
- Thread starter
- #74
Re: A great story
This isnt bad. I worked hard on this!!
STOKAL
based on a true story
Part 11
By Nintendoobsessed
Jonah fell to the hard floor. He was in the center of a circle of kids. Thier skin was forming. It was too high. He tried to smash through, but the skin was too tough.
I begged for mercy. I showed it that I... Mario paused. WHAT? Said the robt. Infuriated at the pause. I...I showed it this...clearing his hair.
The door to the room shut. A robotic hand that had blood on it came out of the celing, grabbing the girl. I tried to grab her, but she was pulled away, screaming. I sighed. I could do 1 thing. I turned on the computer. Then I remberd I had that weird disc. I inserted it.
Jonah screamed and screamed. The skin clogged him like thick dough. He punshed and and kicked, but it didnt work. Thier skin started to latch on to his.
WEE-OOH, WEE-OOH. The police parked thier car. It was 7:43, and many parents had showed up. The first policeman tried to open the door, but it was locked. They (the policemen) started talking. One hit the window to no avail. We will have to clim. He reached the top, and looked. The other one came up. They hurried to a open hatch.
A strange screen poped up on the computer screen. A purplish body appeard. Hmm? I said.
That girl- I forgot her name, was thrown to the roof. A policeman was entering the hatch, and turned around But the hand grabbed him back into the hatch. The hatch shut, and lazers rose from the sides of the roof. A holigraphic purple body appeared from the roof from all sides of the lazers, strange programmings, and numbers were going into a hand part of the holigraphe body. Susie screamed and backed up.
The dirt fell off as she looked at the school, swearing.
Next Time: Part 12...SEASON FINALE!
To be continued...
Nabber Simpson said:
This isnt bad. I worked hard on this!!
STOKAL
based on a true story
Part 11
By Nintendoobsessed
Jonah fell to the hard floor. He was in the center of a circle of kids. Thier skin was forming. It was too high. He tried to smash through, but the skin was too tough.
I begged for mercy. I showed it that I... Mario paused. WHAT? Said the robt. Infuriated at the pause. I...I showed it this...clearing his hair.
The door to the room shut. A robotic hand that had blood on it came out of the celing, grabbing the girl. I tried to grab her, but she was pulled away, screaming. I sighed. I could do 1 thing. I turned on the computer. Then I remberd I had that weird disc. I inserted it.
Jonah screamed and screamed. The skin clogged him like thick dough. He punshed and and kicked, but it didnt work. Thier skin started to latch on to his.
WEE-OOH, WEE-OOH. The police parked thier car. It was 7:43, and many parents had showed up. The first policeman tried to open the door, but it was locked. They (the policemen) started talking. One hit the window to no avail. We will have to clim. He reached the top, and looked. The other one came up. They hurried to a open hatch.
A strange screen poped up on the computer screen. A purplish body appeard. Hmm? I said.
That girl- I forgot her name, was thrown to the roof. A policeman was entering the hatch, and turned around But the hand grabbed him back into the hatch. The hatch shut, and lazers rose from the sides of the roof. A holigraphic purple body appeared from the roof from all sides of the lazers, strange programmings, and numbers were going into a hand part of the holigraphe body. Susie screamed and backed up.
The dirt fell off as she looked at the school, swearing.
Next Time: Part 12...SEASON FINALE!
To be continued...
PokemonMaster
LETS START A NO AVATAR/SIG FAD.
Re: A great story
This would be fitting in "off subject discussion".
But someone already asked the mods this.
"Are we allowed to post fan stuff that isn't Mario related?"
The answer was yes.
@NintendoObsessed
Not very fan fiction unless it was inspired by something.
But don't be discouraged! Effort will make the difference. Try taking the advice lightly. Take the advice. Its not going to harm you.
This would be fitting in "off subject discussion".
But someone already asked the mods this.
"Are we allowed to post fan stuff that isn't Mario related?"
The answer was yes.
@NintendoObsessed
Not very fan fiction unless it was inspired by something.
But don't be discouraged! Effort will make the difference. Try taking the advice lightly. Take the advice. Its not going to harm you.