Typical Tragedy

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Don't Fear said:
Yes, because I had absolutely no dialogue or description or plot advancement or humor or anything of the sort in that chapter. Maybe you weren't paying attention to how I tried to end almost all the fighting and had a little hint in there about Alex's true character. But no, I'm ready to bet you just saw fighting and cried and clicked away before you bothered to read the rest of the chapter.
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Tabs, you're a cool guy, but for someone who wants criticism, you sure do love to get mad at people who criticize you.
 
The Evil Midnight Bomber What Bombs at Midnight said:
Don't Fear said:
Yes, because I had absolutely no dialogue or description or plot advancement or humor or anything of the sort in that chapter. Maybe you weren't paying attention to how I tried to end almost all the fighting and had a little hint in there about Alex's true character. But no, I'm ready to bet you just saw fighting and cried and clicked away before you bothered to read the rest of the chapter.
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Tabs, you're a cool guy, but for someone who wants criticism, you sure do love to get mad at people who criticize you.
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He didn't remark on anything else in that chapter. That's what made me angry.
 
The Evil Midnight Bomber What Bombs at Midnight said:
Tabs, you're a cool guy, but for someone who wants criticism, you sure do love to get mad at people who criticize you.
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no, he only gets mad at Nabber

I did post a much longer criticizing post than Nabber's and it was fine, so...

Nabber said:
Dr. Javelin said:
Nabber said:
I'm fine with reading long chapters but I have trouble reading long passages online.
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What's the difference?
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Long chapters are online.
Regular long chapters are in ink.
Big difference.
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If you're that desperate for ink chapters, then print it out and read it in real life. TA DA
 
[quote author=The concluding notes]A double agent was mentioned and I misled most of you to believe it was Anton- but the one that was referrred to in the conversation between Murzon, Rudnicki and Zanza had been with the group from the beginning.[/quote]
You little trickster. I mentioned earlier (in fact, if I had time, I would quote myself) that it couldn't be Anton because he wasn't with them from the beginning and you specifically told me that becuse Anton was part of the higher-up decision to send a team that he was with them from the beginning.

You could have just said you outright lied to us, it would be better.

EDIT: Oh wait, it says "most of you" so I suppose I maybe fall into that category?
That said... this was awesome. Your writing at the finest.

(and yes Nabber there wasn't as much fighting this time, it was mostly backstory and reveals so don't say that it was still repetitive)

I can't really say much more without spoilering it, and though I could spoiler tag those, I highly doubt you people reading this will be able to contain your curiosity. So go read it.
 
Sweet. I'm glad you liked it. I hope the
weird time shit
didn't fuck with your head too much?
 
Nice. I loved the backstory that was in the chapter, especially Rudnicki and MBV's parts (though I'm not really sure how relevant MBV's backstory is at the moment.) It was a great way to end the chapter, though I'm still kind of confused about the whole traitor thing.

Also
I took the essence of this world’s existence, and it became one with me.
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Alex=Zanza?

I know that you are going to pull something with Zanza. I don't know if this is it but you are definitely going to do something.
 
No, no- Alex, for just a moment, had omniscience- and it allowed him to prepare for the War.
MBV's will become relevant much later on.

And Javelin, I don't think I'm even capable of coming up with something that crazy.
yet
 
Yeah this is starting to turn into what I was planning for Project Mercury.

I guess it's even more inspired by Tabuu than I thought.
 
Nabber said:
I loved the backstory that was in the chapter, especially[...]MBV's parts
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But my canonical backstory throughout any and all wiki fiction is that I was abandoned as a toddler in the outskirts of Darwin, adopted by the Aboriginal tribes of Arnhem Land and raised in the shield-making and piss-throwing ways of the Crocodile Gods. I moved to Katherine at the age of 12 where I gained a penchant for sniping, and when I came of age traveled to the United States where I joined a team of equally quirky mercenaries in a union that is now called XephFrag.




yes, I'm aware this has nothing to do with the actual fiction at hand but it had to be saaaaaaaiiiiiiiid
 
Crocodile Dippy said:
Nabber said:
I loved the backstory that was in the chapter, especially[...]MBV's parts
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But my canonical backstory throughout any and all wiki fiction is that I was abandoned as a toddler in the outskirts of Darwin, adopted by the Aboriginal tribes of Arnhem Land and raised in the shield-making and piss-throwing ways of the Crocodile Gods. I moved to Katherine at the age of 12 where I gained a penchant for sniping, and when I came of age traveled to the United States where I joined a team of equally quirky mercenaries in a union that is now called XephFrag.

yes, I'm aware this has nothing to do with the actual fiction at hand but it had to be saaaaaaaiiiiiiiid
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Don't Fear said:
Typical Tragedy has been cancelled.

I'll explain why when the depression goes away.
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look what you've done dippy you monster
 
Seriously, you must have poured a ton of your time into this. I mean, I haven't even caught up with all the chapters and yes there are things I don't like about it but just suddenly stopping now is like if JK Rowling got halfway through the last Harry Potter book and then gave up!

C'mon, don't do this. It really looked like something great was being set up here, I was looking forward to it!
 
If your heart really isn't in it, then just say it's on hiatus or something. I'm sure that you could rediscover your interest or something.

Heck, considering how fast you update compared to practically every other fic on here, you deserve a five-month break (at least) to allow the rest of us to catch up.
 
7:49 PM - Travis Touchdown(TheNoMoreHero): Actually Smiley
7:50 PM - Travis Touchdown(TheNoMoreHero): Here's how it's going to go.
7:50 PM - Smiley The Hun: Hm?
7:50 PM - Travis Touchdown(TheNoMoreHero): I'm goign to continue Typical Tragedy, and your /avatar/ will remain a character within it. I will /not/ put in any romance, but I'm not going to directly state the end of it either
7:50 PM - Travis Touchdown(TheNoMoreHero): Basically you gave me your permission so you're going to have to suck it up
7:51 PM - Travis Touchdown(TheNoMoreHero): And I'm 2/3 done with TT anyways
7:51 PM - Travis Touchdown(TheNoMoreHero): I'm sorry if it'll bother you, but ATWA would've been much worse for you
7:51 PM - Travis Touchdown(TheNoMoreHero): And I'm not in violation of any rules.
7:51 PM - Travis Touchdown(TheNoMoreHero): This hardly warrants a "special case".
7:51 PM - Travis Touchdown(TheNoMoreHero): The interactions between Tabuu and Smiley
7:51 PM - Travis Touchdown(TheNoMoreHero): Not me and you, Tabuu and Smiley
7:52 PM - Travis Touchdown(TheNoMoreHero): CHARACTERS
7:52 PM - Travis Touchdown(TheNoMoreHero): Will not be romantic.
7:52 PM - Travis Touchdown(TheNoMoreHero): I won't change what's already there for your sake, though.
7:52 PM - Travis Touchdown(TheNoMoreHero): TT deserves to be finished.
7:52 PM - Travis Touchdown(TheNoMoreHero): And people liked that shit.
7:52 PM - Travis Touchdown(TheNoMoreHero): So I'm going to continue it.
7:52 PM - Travis Touchdown(TheNoMoreHero): Okay?
7:52 PM - Smiley The Hun: that's fine
 
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