The Rise of X

[Toad Eightyfive]

Ultimate GalacticPetey's appearance has been confirmed and is on the UP page.

...no it's not.

 

[User4042]

Ultimate GalacticPetey's appearance has been confirmed and is on the UP page.

...no it's not.

Here.

 

[Nabber]

So it's basically a perfect version of you?

 

[GalacticPetey]

Okay, since you guys are unhappy, I'll let you decide how to improve.

 

[Zero777]

This is not our story this is your's. If you think the current spoiled one is the best then do it to your heart's desire not to appease us.

 

[banjonator1]

I'm cameoing. Can't wait for you to be un-banned so we can see how this turns out.

 

[Nabber]

So, the prologue was kind of iffy.
By the way guys, the prologue is on UP.

 

[Pyro]

Wow big bump.

 

[Zero777]

I found the Prologue a bit of meh

 

[Zero777]

Alright, the author is back. What is it you got for us?

 

[GalacticPetey]

Chapter 1 is almost finished.

 

[Nabber]

So was the prologue but why bother posting that.

 

[GalacticPetey]

Umm, what?

 

[Nabber]

Will you post the prologue here so we can read it?

 

[GalacticPetey]

It's on Userpedia.

 

[Nabber]

Okay, but why can't you post it here for convenience? At the very least give us the UP article for the story.

 

[GalacticPetey]

Are you that lazy that you can't open another tab and view it?

 

[Nabber]

Are you that lazy that you can't post the link to your own story?
Yes, I can go look for it but I don't feel like searching all over UP for it.

 

[GalacticPetey]

Oh i thought you meant to post the actaul story here.

http://userpedia.adriels.com/wiki/The_Rise_of_X

 

[Nabber]

Anyway. This was, again, meh. The dialogue feels unrealistic and the description isn't very good.

 

[User4042]

Nice story (I must be the only one who likes it)

 

[GalacticPetey]

Chapter 1 is here.

http://userpedia.adriels.com/wiki/The_Rise_of_X/Chapter_1

The first few chapters may seem boring, but once all the characters are introduced, it will get more exciting

 

[User4042]

I like it so far

 

[GalacticPetey]

I like it so far

You appear next chapter

 

[Zero777]

Review:

Chapter 1 went by rather quick and should of been merged with the prologue because I didn't feel any progression in the story. It was rather unrealistic but I was able to tolerate that.

5.4/7

We'll just have to wait and see what will happen in the future.