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GLaDOS said:He didn't. I found it myself.LuigiNo.1 said:I know Nabber is your editor, but why did you link him Chapter 2 if it wasn't finished?
That's not a good idea.Yoshidude99 said:I haveGLaDOS said:Who posts a chapter that's not finished?
Here is a major reason why a lot of stories on here aren't that great. They're rushed. You uplooad them spontaneously and don't plan it out. Try writing the chapter out on paper, then upload it online.
He said he'd be back in a month or two. :PGLaDOS said:Okay, he's leaving the forums so this can be locked I guess.
We should probably leave it open anyway, just in case.GLaDOS said:By which time he'll probably start a new story.
I agreeToad2012 said:We should probably leave it open anyway, just in case.GLaDOS said:By which time he'll probably start a new story.
It is my style, but sorry.Discord said:I guess it may just be your style, but I think it would be better without you switching POVs every line. Basically, this is so broken that I can't really keep track of what's happening.
I took out a gun. I pulled the trigger. Then I heard UltraMario screaming, and saw blood on the ground, with a severely injured UltraMario next to it.
I thought you got shot by Luigino.1...Yoshidude99 said:How come it says I'm dead yet it never says I die in the story?
I forgotPeter Sam said:I took out a gun. I pulled the trigger. Then I heard UltraMario screaming, and saw blood on the ground, with a severely injured UltraMario next to it.
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HOW MANY TIMES DO I HAVE TO SAY ANTIHERO?
He did. Yoshidude just spedread.Pokémon Trainer Red said:I thought you got shot by Luigino.1...Yoshidude99 said:How come it says I'm dead yet it never says I die in the story?
OKSvetlana said:He did. Yoshidude just spedread.Pokémon Trainer Red said:I thought you got shot by Luigino.1...Yoshidude99 said:How come it says I'm dead yet it never says I die in the story?