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[GalacticPetey]

 

[YoshiMonsta]

Could I be added?

I would like to be a hero, if possible. But if it would make it easier I would be happy as a villain.

 

[Specific Neptune]

Added.

 

[YoshiMonsta]

Thanks. I think your story is really good! I noticed that even your punctuation has improved from part one. Your story plot and character descriptions are great.

 

[Zero777]

I'm not going to review now since it says that it will be added upon soon but I have to say on the last part you said Shroobario twice and isn't a bit weird that Zero doesn't interject why he isn't part of this team you mention, I just think maybe an interjection follow by an answer of understanding but this is your story.

 

[zackcota]

Please Submit Here Thank You.

 

[Specific Neptune]

Please Submit Here Thank You.

What

 

[Smashley]

Please Submit Here Thank You.

why are you ordering random people to submit their stories and art to you

 

[Mariorules25]

Can i sign up? or am i too late,anyway this story is really good

 

[Specific Neptune]

SIGN UPS SHALL NEVER BE CLOSED

 

[Mariorules25]

SIGN UPS SHALL NEVER BE CLOSED

WOOHOO sign me then RADAGAST!

 

[Specific Neptune]

hero or villain?

 

[Mariorules25]

hero or villain?

A hero seems fitting for a wizard like me..

 

[Specific Neptune]

major or minor

 

[Mariorules25]

major or minor

Major please..if im good enough?..i think i am yeah put me as a major character

 

[Specific Neptune]

Alright.

 

[Mariorules25]

Alright.

Thanks i see my name on major heroes now,shame i dont have userpedia

 

[Zero777]

Has it been updated yet?

 

[Specific Neptune]

No, sorry. I've had a lot of college work to finish up on, and some of it just can't wait. I'll try and get some of this done over the next few weeks, but I can't really promise anything. I will, however, get most of this story up over Christmas, you can count on that.

 

[Zero777]

alright