Can someone help me ?

"Give 8000 points to the player" or "give the player 8000 points".
But I like the "give the player 8000 points" better.
 
Thanks a lot to all of you :p!

And I still have another question... Is this sentence all right?:

In the NTSC version of Donkey Kong Country 3 on SNES, the 'G' letter is missing from the Rocket Rush stage.
 
More like:
In the NTSC version of Donkey Kong Country 3 for SNES, the letter 'G' is missing in the Rocket Rush stage.

Oh, and the correct Spelling is "alright", not "all right".
 
MKGirlism said:
Oh, and the correct Spelling is "alright", not "all right".
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Depends on the source. I've seen some in support of "alright," others in support of "all right."

Anyway, Dr Luigi Tm, you can actually use either "for" or "on" in this situation. There's nothing grammatically wrong with either, and there's nothing wrong with using "missing from" here.
 
Mario4Ever said:
MKGirlism said:
Oh, and the correct Spelling is "alright", not "all right".
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Depends on the source. I've seen some in support of "alright," others in support of "all right."
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Actually, the correct form is all right, BUT alright is slowly gaining acceptance. Still, stick with all right just to play safe.
 
Thanks to all of you!

Now, this sentence is 140 letters long so I cannot add any new word. Is this grammatically correct?:

In I am a Teacher: Super Mario Sweater, the player was able to design a sweater and send it to the company to have a real-life version of it
 
It is missing some punctuations, such as Commas and a Full Stop.
But this is the Twitter limit, hence there is nothing to do about.
 
Whre should be the missing commas? Is this better?:

In I am a Teacher: Super Mario Sweater, the player was able to design a sweater, and send it to the company to have a real version of it.
 
You have the correct Comma now, but for some reason, I don't really like the "real version", but it could be just me.
 
Ok fine! I'll just forget that one, it was not that cool too!

But is this phrase enough precise? :

In Mario Kart Wii, the player cannot play online game modes if the profile name is "Hitler".
 
Dr Luigi Tm said:
Ok fine! I'll just forget that one, it was not that cool too!

But is this phrase enough precise? :

In Mario Kart Wii, the player cannot play online game modes if the profile name is "Hitler".
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Looks fine, but holy crap is that true? LOL
 
Dr Luigi Tm said:
Ok fine! I'll just forget that one, it was not that cool too!

But is this phrase enough precise? :

In Mario Kart Wii, the player cannot play online game modes if the profile name is "Hitler".
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I would change "the profile name" to "their profile name".
 
Or better: Mii name, instead of profile name.
All Profiles in MKW are Mii's, anyway.
 
If I use ''their'', do I need to use playerS (plurial)? Which on is the best?:

In Mario Kart Wii, the player cannot play online game modes if the Mii name is "Hitler".

In Mario Kart Wii, the player cannot play online game modes if his/her Mii name is "Hitler".

In Mario Kart Wii, the player cannot play online game modes if their Mii name is "Hitler".
 
They are all correct, but the third one is the most polite.
 
Thanks a lot!

And which on these sentences is the best?:

On the second loop of the title screen of New Super Mario Bros. U, Luigi won't jump and ground pound with the rest and will look confused.

On the second loop of the title screen of New Super Mario Bros. U, Luigi won't jump and ground pound with the others and will look confused.
 
The second one is better.
 
It's me again!

Can someone tell me if this sentence is all ringht? Thanks!

In New Super Luigi U, a picture of King Boo and Luigi, referencing Luigi's Mansion: Dark Moon, can be found in world 7-Ghost House.
 
Capitalize "world." Other than that, it looks fine to me.
 
Done! Thanks!

It's been a little while. I ould like to know it this sentence is all right?:

In the Virtual Console version of Mario Kart 64, the Kalimari Desert course's train has its wheels recolored from red to black.
 
Dr Luigi Tm said:
Done! Thanks!

It's been a little while. I ould like to know it this sentence is all right?:

In the Virtual Console version of Mario Kart 64, the Kalimari Desert course's train has its wheels recolored from red to black.
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It makes sense, I might change it to In the Virtual Console version of Mario Kart 64, the train in Kalimari Desert has black wheels rather than the original red. But yours is fine, something just seems weird when I read it. :luigi:
 
Thanks again to all of you! I still run te Twitter account (less reguraly) and I have another question...

I would like to know if this is well written:

The Kremlings from the Donkey Kong Country series were originally designed as Battletoads characters.
 
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