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[Dr. Javelin]

This updated twice while I was away?

I hadn't noticed, sorry. I'll review as soon as I can.

 

[Contra(dictory)]

(the second link links to a different page)

 

[Nabber]

Updated again.

this has given me an excuse to reread the story

 

[Contra(dictory)]

Upd8.

 

[Nabber]

I must say, Tabuu, I think this might be your best work yet.

 

[Dr. Javelin]

Javelin Noir is now offline.

note: this never happens irl because i always nearly always win our verbal exchanges

Anyways, I actually really enjoy the way the story is going. Remember how I said I don't particularly enjoy "modern" stories?

This has crossed the border into sci-fi and has suddenly captured my interest. It had a lot to do with Uniju's sword cauterizing the wound he gave, which is exactly how lightsabers work in Star Wars.

Oh and the Matrix-esque VR duels are cool too.

 

[Contra(dictory)]

Javelin Noir is now offline.

note: this never happens irl because i always nearly always win our verbal exchanges

Oh no, you just left out of frustration with Hector's stupidity.

Also, updated.

 

[Contra(dictory)]

Disregard the lines of glitch text at the top of the page, the story still comes up at the bottom.

Next update is World 3 Boss Fight- which, no, won't be the end of World 3. The end of World 3, in fact, will close off the story.

 

[2257]

lines of glitch text at the top of the page

wow hahaha

fixed

 

[Nabber]

Disregard the lines of glitch text at the top of the page, the story still comes up at the bottom.

Next update is World 3 Boss Fight- which, no, won't be the end of World 3. The end of World 3, in fact, will close off the story.

but that's so short for a Tabuu fic

 

[User4042]

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[Dr. Javelin]

but that's so short for a Tabuu fic

tabuu has a life now, so

I enjoyed the chapter, because now it's got political stuff. I personally don't know if I can support Stooben if he's got the same ideals Scarecrow had, kinda like Bill.

 

[Contra(dictory)]

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That's the glitch text I was referring to.

but that's so short for a Tabuu fic

Safety was shorter.

but that's so short for a Tabuu fic

tabuu has a life now, so

I enjoyed the chapter, because now it's got political stuff. I personally don't know if I can support Stooben if he's got the same ideals Scarecrow had, kinda like Bill.

Steve's ideals are those of a tightly-controlled population, with a few highly-priveledged people (the Admins) and a working class that's basically treated like indentured servants. I wouldn't necessarily call him a Right or a Leftie, but he is more or less a dictator- Silicon City was created based on what I believe radicals on both sides fear about America: absolute governmental control and ruthless capitalism.

Scarecrow was more "I want to create a utopia", in the same manner Communists were. Operating beneath him was an act of public servitude, not a gift of power. His control over the people wouldn't be very tight at all, but they would be under constant, constant surveillance- anybody who threatened his dream of paradise would be eliminated.

Stooben and Hector, however...well, you'll figure it out.

 

[Contra(dictory)]

also jesus christ safety was terrible

 

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Wow, I forgot all about this thread.

Boss Fight, World 3-3 added.

The finale is coming soon.

 

[Contra(dictory)]

Updated again.

Finale after this one.

 

[Nabber]

By finale, do you mean five chapters of fighting and revelations?

 

[Contra(dictory)]

No, I mean a single stage wrapping up all the plot threads with one/two final fights.

 

[Contra(dictory)]

Anyways, TRO132's Resolutions arc wasn't meant to be interpreted as one big finale.

It was the final Arc- the real finale was, as you well know, Resolutions 5.

 

[Contra(dictory)]

Oh, uh, I finished this. If anyone cares enough to read.

 

[Dr. Javelin]

um, i actually missed the link to the ending the first time i looked through it. i just assumed you weren't done. >_>

Yesterday though I looked more closely at your sign and noticed that it said "COMPLETED", so I went back and found the link. I enjoyed the bit about Hector taking power and taking away all the authoritarian stuff, and the ending was... okay, I guess. It had that unfinished note that the ending of Typical Tragedy had too - like all the story threads weren't wrapped up or something. Did Silicon City just join the real world peacefully? What happened to, like, all the other characters? I guess Hector didn't really care that much about what happened, though, so I suppose it makes sense for him to not go in depth about it.

 

[Contra(dictory)]

Hector desired freedom for himself and for Silicon. He gained it, gave it and left. My headcanon is that they rejoined the United States as California.