'Shroom Spotlight

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What example are you thinking of?
 
Falinks said:
Well, I'm not the best at telling unnecisary from neccisary, but I fell like I need to do my favorite Paper Mario game justice, soo...
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Look at other articles (perhaps even from same game if not written terribly) and try and see what looks out of place.

"Count Bleck is a unique figure among Mario's rogues gallery, as he is the only villain so far who is motivated entirely by sadness and regret, and not by a lust for power, control, or revenge (e.g. Elder Princess Shroob). He is a tragic villain, whose actions are born from the purest of emotions: love. Regardless, Bleck at first seems to be a stereotypical villain with no feelings who wishes to end reality just because he's evil, but it is soon revealed that Bleck is an emotionally tortured person, who is not as evil as he first appears."

Paragraphs like very out of place for the wiki, and should certainly be cut down and rewritten.
 
What's hilarious about that paragraph is that Count Black IS motivated by power, control, AND revenge.

Also love is not pure at all. Love is the reason this guy became a genocidal maniac.
 
I feel like we should put pages for games like Hiding koopa can have it´s own page that has all the hiding koopas.
 
I don't have a strong enough grasp on Super Paper Mario's story, but to me the tone in Count Bleck's general information section seems fitting enough for an encyclopedia. There are some small instances of padding and the paragraph quoted by @Duskull in particular could use less dramatic cruft, but the thing is at large quite articulate and coherent on what it wishes to communicate.

Again, I'm not exactly a SPM erudite so if there are major issues with the information presented therein, which I wouldn't be surprised to be the case given @Ultra Violet's comment, I stand to be corrected.
 
GreenThunder said:
I feel like we should put pages for games like Hiding koopa can have it´s own page that has all the hiding koopas.
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Can we get some more info on this? If you mean in regard to 'Shroom sections, then this isn't something the wiki would cover, but is there a game mode called Hiding Koopa somewhere that may have passed us by?
 
Some of the images on the DK Jungle Climber page show the "No image available" image.

These include: Klobber, Banana, Banana Bunch, Crystal Star, Hammer, and Wings.
 
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I fixed the citation on Luigi's Mansion, just searched it on the website and I got the leaderboards for it.
 
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