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The Mysterious Gait Under Wraps

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(Note: There is a higher-resolution version; the version above is the one that's most commonly shared, due to its lower amount of memory)

It's a start of a new page, and I decided to start with a piece that got a surprising amount of popularity.

Sometimes, I get some inspiring ideas on unusual thoughts about the Mario series, and if I'm lucky, they get to be drawn. What you see above is a result of one of my ideas that I felt has potential to be something more. The basic idea is: what does Peach's dress look like underneath it? Specifically, how do the legs move under the skirt? You see, in Paper Mario, only three humans exist: Mario, Luigi, and Peach. Mario and Luigi's feet move like a pendulum, which leaves little to the imagination. But Peach is another matter. She is never seen in any other clothing that shows her legs.

Indeed, nobody seems to ask this question but that means it's also a question begging for some natural suggestions, and off-the-wall ones. This idea initially started out as a mere sketch and some strange suggestions, but eventually I wanted to use it as an opportunity to draw animation.
This animated piece is my serious attempt, whereas previous ones were just small stuff. Indeed, the real challenge is coming up with how the legs move in motion. Some, they were easy, but many of them were difficult. For example, the Regular one features normal walking, but animating a walk is not so easy.

A couple of them got revisions. Float had less feet movement but I decided to redraw it to give it clearer movements. Also, wheel initially have the feet moving clockwise until someone pointed out that it looked like it moves backwards, which is a good call because I didn't notice it.

This is a 12-frame animated piece, and it loops every second, so it's 12fps. Within the 12 frames certain things took advantage of the whole 12 frames, while others are 6 unique images stretched across 12 frames (2 frames each). This is most evident in the text, which I should point out were not animated uniquely. Since I had fun with the result, I just threw in the animated text. One thing that I initially also did was to put Paper Peach blinking, but blinking every second looks a bit unnatural, so the blinking motion is omitted. Indeed, I think blinking probably looks best at 2 seconds each time, or maybe more.

Initially, I shared this piece on Reddit and Tumblr, the former in r/papermario and reposted at r/mario. I left the art overnight, not thinking it to have more popularity compared to the Mario piece I did. I was a bit worried that some people may questioned it too much and dislike it, but to my surprise, it actually took off! It's currently has the most notes of my posts on Tumblr, while on Reddit, it ended up being the third-most upvoted post on r/papermario. I have to thank everyone who resonated with this piece, I certainly didn't expect it to be as popular as it did. It's one thing to have the Garfield styled Mario being popular (which I expect), but this is another level entirely.

By the way, on Tumblr, these are the final results of the poll, after I was only made aware of the option to make a poll.
The final results consist of 1255 votes. Swing (Legs) has 19.3%, Swing (Feet) has 11.4%, Shuffle has 4.8%, Wheel has 8.8%, Regular has 14.3%. Float has 12.3%, Stretch has 0.9%, Hop has 1.8%, Skirt Crawl has 10.7%, Secret Skates has 12.8%, and the others are only 3.1%


The one that seems to garner a surprising amount of popularity is Secret Skates. It's one of the funnier ones, and I am glad that I cranked my head to come up with the idea. I wanted something mechanical for one of them, like riding a cycle, but they seem to be difficult to implement, until I decided I want a pair of skates that magically appear. It also looks nicely animated, which I am surprised on how good it ended up being.

Sadly, Reddit's viewership timeline is gone after 45 days since posting, so I can't share the graph for that post.

Hopefully these look good enough to get some laughs! I felt accomplished looking at all the animation I spent nights doing.

Park Animation Test
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Krita has a feature that allows you to draw animation. Wanting to experiment with it, I decided to start with something simple: a two frame animation. I often like the look of redrawn frames to give the impression of time passing in the scenery, which is what enamored me on Kirby's Dream Land 3 compared to Kirby Super Star (though their art style is not shabby).

I do think that a two-frame animation might be too simple, though. It probably has its uses, so maybe I might find a use for two frames of looping animation.

Thank you for reading.
 
Tower of Goombabel

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Goomba (peak): [Looking through a pair of binoculars] Look, Mario's approaching!
Goomba (others): [Repeating] Mario's approaching!

[Mario stops, looking at one of the Goombas]
Goomba #1: Ha, Mario! You shall not pass!

[Mario looks up at the towering Goombas]
Goomba #2: As you can see, we, the Goombas, have decided that enough is enough: we are not going to get stomped any longer! So, we formed a tower to stop you from stomping us. Impressive, huh?

[Mario rolls his eyes, arms akimbo]
Goomba #1: Nyeh, we even blocked you! We're unstoppable! What are you going to do now, huh?

[Mario rolls over the bottom-most Goomba, which was sleeping, knocking it away and collapsing the entire Goomba Tower]

Goomba #3: Hey, get back here! We have prepared our assault for days! You can't just let it all go to waste! Think about uuuuuuus!
[Mario got out of the roll running off, while the knocked away Goomba remains dazed. Mario grunts "Hoo Hoo!"]

For January 2024, I was feeling inspired to do a comic about Goombas, and how they have a tendency to stack. This comic strip was also done in about two days, the first to write the script, while the second is to finish up the comic. Yes, unlike most comic strips, this one took one day to finish drawing, something that is rare for me to accomplish. I had to do it last minute because I was doing a "character a day" thing but unfortunately I fell off, though I wish to continue it if I can.

Probably one of my favourite things about the art is the title. I thought the title referencing the Tower of Babel with a Goomba twist is inspired, and I can't say for sure if anything else would've come close to this. The fact that this comic gained approval by Shoey for its pacing is also encouraging, which I didn't expect but a compliment's a compliment.

One thing about this comic is that I brought back the bonus panel from two issues ago, because there is simply one joke that I needed to say but is not essential to the comic, and it's the one where Luigi gets knocked out for the effort. I think I must say that the combination of Goomba on Luigi's cap makes it look a bit like Goombuigi, don't you think?

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[Luigi got knocked into the ground in the small state by the collapsed Goomba tower, implying that he got damaged. One Goomba has a pair of binoculars dropped on it.]
Goomba: Eh, close enough.


Anton's Festive Brew

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Although this piece was completed in 2022, I forgotten to show it off for real this time. This was for issue 189, basically the Christmas and Mario Kart themed issue. Basically Anton wanted an artwork of him making some eggnog. If you ask me what I think of eggnog, I can only say that I have no idea. After all, we aren't in the culture of drinking this type of stuff, but if The Simpsons is of any indication, it's a type of drink that you can't take too much of.

For the artwork, I like the result. One thing I employ is to colour the lines based on the item, so like if a robe is white, it gets a blue-ish line, and the red pattern gets a similar red line. And if shading is involved, then the lines are lighter in tone as well. In some ways, I learned quite some things when doing this, so it ended up quite an experience for me.

Thank you for reading.
 
F9 - Worst Remake

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Ah, the morning paper! I love the smell of fresh newspaper. What are the latest in the news today? Headlines, hmm, we have the princess opening a school to train the Toads to be able to defend themselves, but it turns out to not do anything. Or how about that scandal involving Wario once again bamboozling his employees. With how often he gets away with it, you would think he would go out of business, but he still finds a way to keep operating and getting his employees to still work under him. You got to respect the hustle.

But what I am actually looking forward is the comic strip section. I love comic strips! Now where could that page be. The entertainment section, hmm, and hmm, the sports section, the TV listings, and the list of Worst Remakes... Ha, I doubt there any remakes worst than what's listed there! Ah, there we go, the comic strip section! Good to see some cartoons from "Super Mario: Wonder World!"

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Whoa, I stand corrected! It is possible for the worst remakes to be even worse! Anyway, off to work. I wonder how my mall crew is faring now. *RING* Huh, may I know who is speaking? There's a problem in the warehouse? I'll be there right away!



#
Nominee
Number of votes
Percentage of votes
1Super Mario Maker for Nintendo 3DS42927.27%
2Super Mario All-Stars Limited Edition21213.48%
3Super Mario 3D All-Stars18011.44%
4New Super Mario Bros. U Deluxe1579.98%
5Mario & Luigi: Bowser's Inside Story + Bowser Jr.'s Journey1368.65%
6Diddy Kong Racing DS1227.76%
7Super Mario Bros. Deluxe754.77%
8Super Mario 64 DS724.58%
9Luigi's Mansion (3DS)422.67%
10Mario Kart 8 Deluxe311.97%
11Super Mario Advance291.84%
12Mario & Luigi: Superstar Saga Bowser's Minions241.53%
13Super Mario World: Super Mario Advance 2231.46%
13Yoshi's Island: Super Mario Advance 3231.46%
15O. Paper Mario: The Thousand-Year Door (Switch)80.51%
16O. Mario Vs. Donkey Kong (Switch)20.13%
16O. Super Mario Bros. Special20.13%
18O. BS Super Mario USA10.06%
18O. Donkey Kong Country 2 (GBA)10.06%
18O. Super Mario All-Stars10.06%
18O. Super Mario Bros. (Game & Watch)10.06%
18O. Super Mario Bros. (Mini Classics)10.06%
18O. Super Mario RPG (Switch)10.06%
Total votes: 1573

For this year's presentation, I wanted to do something punny. Yes, "punny". Even though I heard that every award presentation was already taken, I went to check as the deadline goes nearer, and was surprised that there were vacant slots, clearly from commitments that resulted the original planners dropping them. So I decided to take one of the awards to do what I wanted to do.

When coming up with how to present them in punny form, a stroke of idea struck me: I could do them in a newspaper comic strip format! The lack of colour even helps because colouring compounds the time it takes to complete art. As with a previous presentation, I decided to do 7 of them. But they are all in a "weekday" format, which is a strip. They all follow the same formula, namely:
  1. Seemingly normal situation
  2. Lead-up to the twist
  3. The actual twist
  4. Punny version of the game's title
This is the format basically, but the dialogue in the last panel was added later when I though that more could be added. When everything is planned and has a structure, it makes the drawing process smoother. It wouldn't surprise me if this is how the newspaper comics work, where if they have a framework to follow, the ideas to fit them start to flow.

The trickiest part is coming up with the puns. Some they were easy, like the first one Super Mario Maker is "Super Wario Waker". Some I had to crack my head to come up, one such case is Browser's Inside Story + Bowser Jr.'s Attorney, which I am proud of but it certainly took the time to realise. The puns basically write the comic themselves, which goes back to how proper planning makes everything go smoothly.

Given how newspaper comic this is, it should've been 6 regular strips and one Sunday large-scale strip. I didn't initially think of this, but even if I did, there was no time to do a proper colour panel because when I started it, the deadline was already almost over, so the grandiose idea wasn't realise. In fact, I can't really talk about this without going into the upcoming Shroom (at that time), because I recycled most of the material for it, save for two new cartoons. Which we'll get to in a moment...

Super Mario Wonder World (Extra)

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{Mario runs towards Peach's castle, while Yoshi is waving on the castle's rooftop}
{As Mario runs, he crosses by two Toads wearing sandwich boards, one of them advertising pizza. He also crosses by a wall that has various ads, including from Daisy's orange, Yoshi's egg, Birdo with a ribbon, Delfino Fruits, Hotel 1UP Mushroom, and Burning DK}

Mario: {Talking to Peach} Peach, I think the advertisements are getting out of hand...

Title drop: Super Mario 64 ADS

{Lakitu positions his camera on an advertisement on Baby Park}

Mario: Wha? Are you in on it too??

Lakitu: Of course! It pays well!
The first is another strip in the same format as the rest! This one is actually #8, and the reason I wanted to do this is that it got a similar amount of votes as the one in #7, and I can imagine someone who lamented that their "favourite" game missed the mark by a margin. The next one is perhaps a way to make up for the lack of a "Sunday" strip...

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{Wario is sleeping, dreaming about money. The alarm clock is ringing}
Wario: ZZZZ

SFX: RIIIIIIING

{A fire under Wario's bed causes his butt to burn, propelling him high up in the air from the burn}

Wario: Hot hot hot hot hot

{A spring bounces Wario forward in the air}

SFX: SPROING

{A hammer smashes Wario downwards, causing his head to develop a temporary bump}

{A horn blasts near Wario, causing him to cover his ears}

SFX: AWOOGA

{Wario drops in a cannon and gets blasted upwards}

SFX: BOOM

Wario: Waaaaa

{Wario is slapped downwards}

SFX: SLAP

Wario: Oof!

{Wario is flashed by a lightbulb, causing him to cover his eyes}

SFX: FLASH

{Wario is whacked by a bat}

SFX: THWACK

Wario: D'oh

{Wario is doused in water from a bucket}

SFX: SPLASH

{Wario drops on the floor, soaking wet}

Wario: I need a snoo... {was about to say snooze before being interrupted}

{Wario is tapped by a stylus that electrocutes him} SFX: ZAP

Wario: {Fully awake and panicking} I'm awake! I'm awake!

Title drop: Super Wario Waker for Nintendo 3DS

Toad: This is great!

Mario: Thanks! It was fun to make it! And to wake him!

Yes, it's a proper coloured strip! While the previous one took less than a day to complete, this one took longer to do, and it's not just the colouring that took effort. The planning of Wario's travel arc is another challenge to get it, as well as the paneling. I hope that they were worth the effort, because these were very time-consuming to do.

Thank you for reading.
 
Flowers Don't Tell, They Show

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{Mario, Luigi, Wario, and Waluigi walking in the flower fields.}
Mario: Here we are guys, a field full of flowers! Perfect to find some flowers for the princess!

{Mario picks some carnations}
Mario: These are a classic pick for a bouquet!
{Luigi picks some daisies}
Luigi: Oh, how about these? She will love these! Especially a certain someone.
{Waluigi picks some roses}
Waluigi: Nothing better than roses, to stop and smell.

Wario: {Points to a flower} Ha! That's nothing! This flower here will impress her!

{Wario grabs a flower, but the flower appears to be stuck}

{Wario struggles to pull the flower}
Wario: Stu... pid... flo... wer!

{Wario successfully pulls out the flower}
Wario: Yah! Here we go!

{Wario sees an angry, red Wiggler who stares at him angrily}

{Wario turns to see that the flower was uprooted from Wiggler's head, who has no more flower on its head}

{Wario puts back the flower on Wiggler's head, haphazardly, surprising the Wiggler}
Wario: Heh-heh...

{Wario gets tackled by the charging Wiggler}
SFX: BONK

{While the Wiggler dashes, the charging Wiggler collides Waluigi, causing him to drop the roses he was holding}
SFX: ZOOOOM
Waluigi: Yeowch!

{Mario and Luigi are holding flowers to put them in a basket; Mario holding a carnation, Luigi holding a daisy}
Wario: WAAAAAH!
Waluigi: Ah-wa-wa-wa-wah!
{Luigi and Mario turns to see Wario being chased by the Wiggler, while Waluigi is saddled on that Wiggler}
Mario: What in carnation!?
Luigi: Oops-a-daisy!
{Red Toad and Purple Toad are nearby; Purple Toad takes a picture of the incident}

Coming from great praise for the previous Shroom article about the tall tower of Goombas, I decided to utilise the energy for another comic strip because that was what was liked about the previous cartoon. Indeed, it's structured like a Sunday comic strip which is more ambitious. Unlike many cartoons that were done in the last minute, this one was done before the proposed deadline because I won't be available about a week before its publication, thanks to the Lunar New Year. I'm glad to get this done way ahead of time, I must say.

The general theme for this cartoon is flowers, inspired by how February is Valentine's Day, so that's why it's kinda "flowery", even including a Mario species associated with flowers, Wiggler. The title of this strip is a result of finding idioms related to flowers, and I decided on this one in the end because it is somewhat related to the subject about Wiggler's seemingly hidden presence. Speaking of the Wiggler, part of the gag is inspired by a classic LeftyGreenMario render of Waluigi pulling out Wiggler's flower by mistake and hilarity is expected to ensue.

One thing I learned from her is that she did a comic about Luigi picking white lilies for Peach, which is usually a flower used for funerals. Of course I didn't know that but that would probably not be a bad inclusion. I went with daisies for Luigi should be obvious, but if not, it's mainly because of Princess Daisy, and to facilitate the punchline where the Mario brothers spout some flower-related puns to react to the hijinks of Wario and Waluigi.

And then there's the bonus panel:
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Toad: Dude, you spelled Wiggler wrong!
{Purple Toad smacks his head with his hand; Not seen: Wiggler was spelled "wigger"}
I do not know how many of you know about this, but Nintendo of America once made a blunder on Twitter where they spelled "Wiggler" wrong, in a post about Waluigi riding Wiggler. Given how the word "wigger" doesn't seem like something appropriate for Mario, naturally it was deleted but this is the type of blunder that gets remembered and brought up at times, so we might never hear the end of it.

Beyond this, the cartoon's colour is simplistic like the last one because again, bonus panels were more "throwaway" to compliment the joke of the main cartoon and is not meant to be a huge artistic piece.

The Two Little Princesses & The Two Little Plumbers

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For our secondary cartoon, I present you one of the art that I did that I wanted to scan, and then trace on a computer. But I decided against this and instead just traced the line art with my ink pen and call it a day.

The first is based on one of BourgyMan's art which is when Peach and Daisy does that goofily excited faces in the original The Three Little Princesses comic that he did a long time ago. That little highlights to indicate excitement near their heads are meant to simulate the amiibo's logo. One thing I do have to say is that while I lament that Peach's face is not made for exaggerated expressions (and I am sure some find it better that way), somehow I still make certain silly expressions for Peach when I do get the chance, within the limitations her face presented. Daisy on the other hand, I see her having a much more flexible face even though the main series never presented that way, mainly because I think she looks better with a big mouth.

The second is more recent where Mario and Waluigi were proportioned similar to the Paper Mario characters. Waluigi without legs look just about right in this style, even though he is known for his long legs. The overalls probably look weird, but probably not as weird as Waluigi's stick arms.

Thank you for reading.
 
Big Red Secret Exposed

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Transcript said:
{Bowser Jr. is playing with a toy aeroplane patterned after the Junior Clown Car, with a LEGO version of him riding it}
Bowser Jr.: Zooom!

{Bowser furiously slams the door of the room, holding a picture}
SFX: SLAM
Bowser: Son, you got some 'splaining to do!
{Bowser Jr. turns to Bowser in surprise}
Bowser Jr.: Wha? Dad?

{Bowser Jr. looks aghast at the photo Bowser holds}
Bowser Jr.: H-how did you get that photo?
{Bowser, still holding the photo}
Bowser: How I get it is not important! What's important is what were you thinking!


{Bowser Jr. and Bowser are arguing when the photo flies off outside the room, where Kamek notices as it flew by him}
Bowser Jr.: You never (let me) do anything (fun outside!)
Bowser: Do you know (how) angry (I get when nobody involves me in anything fun without my permission?)

{Kamek looks at the photo with a surprise}

{The photo shows Mario and friends dressed in Mario's trademark overalls and caps. The group consists of Mario, Luigi, Peach, Daisy, Toad, Toadette, Yoshi, Birdo, Donkey Kong, Diddy Kong, Pauline, Wario, Waluigi, Rosalina, and Bowser Jr.}
Kamek: Oh my!
It's not immediately obvious, but I focused on doing a comic on Mario Day, just as I did last year about "L is not Real" last year. In fact, this is not the original idea! The original idea is basically about Mario and friends doing a photoshoot with Lakitu taking the picture, so basically a straightforward scenario playing out.

Here is the original script, which I saved for the occasion of this summary:
{Mario looks into the camera}
Lakitu: OK, everyone ready?
Lakitu: Hey Donkey Kong, please move to the right a little. There!
Lakitu: All right, perfect!
Lakitu: The camera is all set! Now say...
{The camera focuses on the group of characters, consisting of Mario and his friends, dressed in Mario's overalls}
Everyone: It's-a me!!!
SFX: SNAP!

Lakitu: OK, now act silly!
{Everybody makes silly expressions in front of the camera}
What this comic ended up being is, believe it or not, originally an idea I had for a bonus panel. So, what got me to change gears with the idea? For one, by the time this comic gets published, Mario Day would already be over, so it would be outdated by the time it got there. What better way to take advantage of the publication date than to do an aftermath of the event? That way, it is more adaptive to the different times this comic would be published, not only for The Shroom, but the eventual sharing I did on Reddit (which got over 1.1k upvotes), and later Tumblr (not so soon, I'm only up to the 11th comic!).

Of course, that means the bonus panel was changed to be related to the event. I like the idea that Kamek also secretly likes Mario just as Bowser Jr., which is what this is about. The colouring of this comic was done first as it's the easiest.

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Transcript said:
{Kamek imagines himself wearing a Mario cap}

Bowser: Kamek, I know what you're thinking and you can forget it!
{Kamek looks to Bowser (off-screen) in surprise}
Kamek: Y-yes, of course...!
Speaking of colouring, the original version of this comic had no colour for the photo! Yes, if you seen this comic when it was published, this was how that part looked like (you can still view it in an archive):
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Of course, it wasn't intended to be uncoloured, since in the actual comic, the photo had red dots to indicate that it would have colour. What I ended up doing is to only give them limited colour, accentuating the uniform red of the characters and a shaded yellow for any darker bits, like the shoes or the hair. I don't normally come back to fix a cartoon I completed, but as I have a fondness of this piece and did not want to do it injustice, I went back to it and did the job, so that I can submit the intended version.

I forgot to mention that this image above was a remnant of the original idea of the characters posing, before I changed gears. But the group photo is too good to waste, which is why it was incorporated in the final product. Of course, this means no Lakitu but sometimes sacrifices were made. Still, at least now you know the mysterious cameraman is supposed to be Lakitu.

Knock Knock! Who's There? Giovanni! Giovanni Who?

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I didn't have much secondary cartoon to show, so here's a piece from the past! Mario's Game Gallery, or Mario's FUNdamentals in some versions, had Mario saying "knock knock" jokes. One joke he made was about Giovanni, where the punchline is "Giovanni hurry up and play for crying out loud?!". I didn't recognise the pun that came with it, but I do like the idea that Giovanni took too long to make a move and made Mario impatient.

This was done in Flash when I was using the program, and I can only draw something nice by tracing from a physically drawn paper. The shading is probably primitive, but I guess it looks good enough for what I was able to do back then.

Thank you for reading.
 
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