New Sherlock Mario Book 1:The Case of the Toxic Donut

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Sure. I am taking the list off though and only having it on Userpedia
 
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http://userpedia.adriels.com/New_Sherlock_Mario_Book_1:_The_Case_of_the_Toxic_Donut/Chapter_4


Chapter 4 up
 
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Well, well... Who is the murderer? :-X
 
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It's only book 4, half of the characters haven't even been revealed.

Mario Fan, you really need patience. Patience is a virtue...that you have not been blessed with.
 
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Yeah. It's only Chapter 4. Like I said, I hope for there to be 20-30 chapters.
 
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Ohh..... I wonder who that is
 
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I plan to make Chapter 5 sometime this week. Also I hope you guys get annoyed at the end. I am trying to leave you at cliffhangers that will make you want to keep reading.
 
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Well, don't tell us that
 
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Chapter 5 up. http://userpedia.adriels.com/New_Sherlock_Mario_Book_1:_The_Case_of_the_Toxic_Donut/Chapter_5
 
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Correction at Chapter 5: At ...'SERVICE,ARROWHEAD'... add a space between the two words.
 
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Chapter 6 up!

http://userpedia.adriels.com/New_Sherlock_Mario_Book_1:_The_Case_of_the_Toxic_Donut/Chapter_6
 
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Nice, but wait, wasn't the event called "Donut Fest", not "Donut Feast"
 
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No, it was always Donut Feast. I go around on some of the pages correcting it to Donut Feast because everyone thinks it's Donut Fest.
 
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Shouldn't it be Donut Fest since there was a carnival and games
 
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Edofenrir said:
Aww, the role of the guy who gets killed is already occupied.

Anyway, I'd like to inquire about the curious title of book one: The Case of the Intoxicated Donut. The title seems strange to me because "intoxicated" pretty much means "drunk". Maybe you should change the title to "The Case of the Poisoned Donut" if that was what you meant, because...

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...I don't think a drunk donut is what you were going for.
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Epic win.
 
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Rolo Lamperouge said:
Shouldn't it be Donut Fest since there was a carnival and games
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Well not exactly, because you pig out on donuts there, like it's a feast. Rides are just for people's amusement
 
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http://userpedia.adriels.com/wiki/New_Sherlock_Mario_Book_1:_The_Case_of_the_Toxic_Donut/Chapter_7

Chapter 7 up!
 
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http://userpedia.adriels.com/wiki/New_Sherlock_Mario_Book_1:_The_Case_of_the_Toxic_Donut/Chapter_8

Chapter 8 up!
 
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Oh nice! Very nice scene.
 
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It must be to late to join?
 
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QuizmoManiac said:
It must be to late to join?
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No, sign ups will always be open. There is no limit,but that doesn't mean youwill be n the second book. You should be in this book though.
 
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New Snowman Mario said:
QuizmoManiac said:
It must be to late to join?
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No, sign ups will always be open. There is no limit,but that doesn't mean youwill be n the second book. You should be in this book though.
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Love the story may i be a new suspect?
 
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Any role is okay for me
 
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