New Sherlock Mario Book 3: The Worldwide Catastrophe

What should the new book 3 be?

  • The Concert Mystery

    Votes: 3 50.0%

  • The Donut Shop Dilema

    Votes: 2 33.3%

  • The Murder on 16th Street

    Votes: 1 16.7%
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Chapter 6. Really short. Read. another chapter coming tomorrow.

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It is short. But good writing. Just saying, I think it takes more than 2 or 3 days to get to Paris from the US.
 
You could have combined Chapter 6 with Chapter 7, just saying. It's veeery short. But, as Nabber already said, has good quality, so I can't complain too much. When will I appear?
 
Nabber said:
It is short. But good writing. Just saying, I think it takes more than 2 or 3 days to get to Paris from the US.
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Wasn't sure, Never been on a boat, so I'm just making it a super fast boat.

Doofenshmirtz Evil said:
You could have combined Chapter 6 with Chapter 7, just saying. It's veeery short. But, as Nabber already said, has good quality, so I can't complain too much. When will I appear?
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Yes, but I did a short chapter to make the next chapter long. Also, don't know when you will appear.

Thank you for your guy's compliments
 
New Super Mario said:
Nabber said:
It is short. But good writing. Just saying, I think it takes more than 2 or 3 days to get to Paris from the US.
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Wasn't sure, Never been on a boat, so I'm just making it a super fast boat.
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Distance from New York city to Enland: 3471 miles.

That means you'll need to travel 1157 miles per day at 48 miles per hour. So it's doable, but only if you have a smaller boat. A cruise ship obviously won't be able to do that much.
 
*Applause* I like it, it finally actually have clues in it. So where on a cruise line with no land in sight can mud be found? Hmm, we'll just have to wait and find out.
 
Charles zi Britannia said:
*Applause* I like it, it finally actually have clues in it. So where on a cruise line with no land in sight can mud be found? Hmm, we'll just have to wait and find out.
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Thank you Zero! I have a goal to make this my best book yet
 
New Super Mario said:
Charles zi Britannia said:
*Applause* I like it, it finally actually have clues in it. So where on a cruise line with no land in sight can mud be found? Hmm, we'll just have to wait and find out.
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Thank you Zero! I have a goal to make this my best book yet
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Nice. Not exactly the most accurate portrayal of a cruise, but since you've never been on one, it's okay.


1. A pool on a ship isn't going to be 12 feet deep. I don't think they'd have a diving board either.
2. A spoon in a hallway? I saw a deck of cards in an elevator shaft. Not the elevator; THE SHAFT.

But again, these are minor complaints. Good job!
 
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