FictionPress Story: Trapped! (Chapter 1 Released! :D)

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Okay, since I have writer's block on my High School story, I'm writing another story that I HOPEFULLY won't get writer block on.

This is FictionPress as well.

The plot is still in progess.

What I do know is that 4 teens get sent a mysterious letter from a young girl. The girl writes that she's trapped in a mysterious mansion. So the teens (2 boys, 2 girls) set off to save the girl. They eventually find it after being lost and get locked in (cliché, I know). Then they set off to find the girl.

There will be mystery, drama, horror and maybe a bit of romance, so it'll be rated T.

There will also be a bit of language, just a warning.

Okay, so here's the signup:

Character full name:
Personality:
Role:

I need 2 teen girls, 2 teen boys, and 1 mystery villain who is responsible for everything.

I'm going to create the character for the young girl (sorry guys):

Teen boys:
1. Charles Francis Mulgrew (SM25)
2. Joe Robbins (Nabber)

Teen girls:
1. Lily White (Lily)
2. Michelle Lim (Smg2daisy)

Villain:
1. Michell May Vail (Stargatedalek)

Sidekick:
1. Johnny Ricochet (YoshiMonsta)

Trapped girl:
1. Juliette M. Willow (MarioBros2)

My signup:

Character full name: Juliette Marie Willow
Personality: Sweet but has a dark side, she's very gullible and naive which is how she fell for being trapped. She can be a hothead, and kinda has a potty mouth for someone so young.
Role: Trapped girl

This story will seem cliché at first, but I promise there will be a HUGE plot twist!
 
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Character full name: Charles Francis Mulgrew
Personality: Pretty brave and a bit of a badass,often wearing a black top with a shamrock in the middle and he also wears a hat backwards
Role: Teen Boy
 
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I will update the list.

I'm probably gonna give signups 3 weeks to a month and if I don't have all the characters I'll just make random characters to fill it in.
 
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Rin Kagamine said:
I will update the list.

I'm probably gonna give signups 3 weeks to a month and if I don't have all the characters I'll just make random characters to fill it in.
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I wouldn't wait that long if I were you, it shouldn't take that long anyway..



Character full name: Michell May Vall
Personality: Evil, I get enjoyment from the torment and distress of others, and have a thing for dangerous reptiles
Role: Villain
looks: again pretty much just like Paige from Tron uprising, but more dark... (and minus Tron suit :P )
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Teen boy please.

Name: Joe Robbins
 
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Nabber said:
Teen boy please.

Name: Joe Robbins
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I'm assuming that you want me to make up the personality?

Stargatedalek said:
Rin Kagamine said:
I will update the list.

I'm probably gonna give signups 3 weeks to a month and if I don't have all the characters I'll just make random characters to fill it in.
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I wouldn't wait that long if I were you, it shouldn't take that long anyway..



Character full name: Michell May Vall
Personality: Evil, I get enjoyment from the torment and distress of others, and have a thing for dangerous reptiles
Role: Villain
looks: again pretty much just like Paige from Tron uprising, but more dark... (and minus Tron suit :P )
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Okay. I'll just see how it goes.

I guess the deadline for how long I wait will be a week or two?

Btw both are accepted.

Now all I need are the girls.
 
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Suppose I will
Name: Lily White
Persinality: A girl who tries hard and likes being the best. Is quite rocky in her appearance as she wears purple and black clothes often, purple eyeliner and haa long, wild dark blonde hair that pretty much covers one eye. She likes writing and is obsessed with history, she often gets over the top and easily offended and often brags about things she is good at. She also is the last person to get a job and gets shy around boys she likes.
Role: Teen girl
 
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Perfect. I just need 1 more girl.

Ps. I sometimes have a bit of a weakness working with characters with a variety of personality, I'll try my best though.
 
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see Rin, I told you it wouldn't take long ;D
 
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@Smg2daisy; Perfect! I can start working on the story!

@Star; Yep. You were right.
 
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Also my character likes rock music and is good as solving puzzles and falls for boys who are simular ti her with a mysterious side.
 
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Phantom L said:
Also my character likes rock music and is good as solving puzzles and falls for boys who are simular ti her with a mysterious side.
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Okay. That might make it a bit easier. This is kind of a mystery story, so puzzles would be cool.
 
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My main first problem is who to start out with the teens, or Juliette and Michell?
 
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you could have just a dark room with me plotting inexplicably as the prologue, just an idea
 
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Stargatedalek said:
you could have just a dark room with me plotting inexplicably as the prologue, just an idea
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No, that's a horrible, cliche opening.
 
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I was actually thinking originally to have Michell bring Juliette into a room and lock her in there.

Then Juliette writes to the 4 teens.

Does that sound good? Cuz that's the only idea I have. :P
 
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Are the signups still open?

If so:

Name: Johnny Ricochet
Personality: IDK you decide.
Role: Whatever you want.
 
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Rin Kagamine said:
I was actually thinking originally to have Michell bring Juliette into a room and lock her in there.

Then Juliette writes to the 4 teens.

Does that sound good? Cuz that's the only idea I have. :P
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Isn't it better for you to decide on your own and not come to us for every piece of the story? It's your story. You're the one telling it.
 
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Nabber said:
Rin Kagamine said:
I was actually thinking originally to have Michell bring Juliette into a room and lock her in there.

Then Juliette writes to the 4 teens.

Does that sound good? Cuz that's the only idea I have. :P
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Isn't it better for you to decide on your own and not come to us for every piece of the story? It's your story. You're the one telling it.
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That was my only problem. I just wanted to know if it was too cliché.


@YoshiMonsta; Actually they were closed, but I could probably write you in.
 
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You don't have to put me in, I can be a surveyor, but if easy enough put me in.
 
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YoshiMonsta said:
You don't have to put me in, I can be a surveyor, but if easy enough put me in.
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I made you the Villain's sidekick.

Is that okay?
 
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