FictionPress Story: Trapped! (Chapter 1 Released! :D)

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Rin Kagamine said:
YoshiMonsta said:
You don't have to put me in, I can be a surveyor, but if easy enough put me in.
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I made you the Villain's sidekick.

Is that okay?
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just like in control the throne ;D except now you my sidekick...
 
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Stargatedalek said:
Rin Kagamine said:
YoshiMonsta said:
You don't have to put me in, I can be a surveyor, but if easy enough put me in.
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I made you the Villain's sidekick.

Is that okay?
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just like in control the throne ;D except now you my sidekick...
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Yeah in control the throne you were my sidekick. Ohhhhh!
 
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yahh thats what I said :???: I'm fine helping you steal teh throne, we should go back there sometime http://www.marioboards.com/index.php?topic=1689.0;topicseen

sorry for taking your thread with our throne desire Rin....
 
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Sorry Rin, we shouldn't have talked about the throne, but by the way. When should we expect the first chapter out?
 
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YoshiMonsta said:
Sorry Rin, we shouldn't have talked about the throne, but by the way. When should we expect the first chapter out?
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It's okay.

And when it comes to my stories, it's usually unpredictable, but I'm working on it as we speak actually. :)

Edit: I'm almost done with the chapter, so expect it within the next 4 hours (FictionPress takes a while to upload and it's stupid sometimes when I try to upload... :/)
 
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Yes, I'm double posting but Chapter 1 is out!

if the url doesn't work at first, try again later, FictionPress said it could take a few hours to get it in the system.

If I got a little out of character, I am very sorry. I tried my best and some of the characters are hard to work with it. *Sigh*

and before Nabber says anything about detail (for example the cellphones), those will be revealed later.

Same about when it mentions Juliette's dead father, that will be revealed later.
 
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>imprisons girl
>friendlies are nearby
>doesn't think to put her in a room without windows

Seems legit.
 
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Nabber said:
>imprisons girl
>friendlies are nearby
>doesn't think to put her in a room without windows

Seems legit.
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I know. That was a bit stupid.
 
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Rin Kagamine said:
Nabber said:
>imprisons girl
>friendlies are nearby
>doesn't think to put her in a room without windows

Seems legit.
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I know. That was a bit stupid.
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I would prob do that though :P

so far so good Rin ;)
 
Don't worry. He will get a perspective.

I can't fit every character in in the first chapter.
 
Pokémon Trainer Nate said:
make all the characters die at the end like in shakespeare
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No. All the characters will stay alive.

There might be a KO or two though
 
Rin Kagamine said:
Pokémon Trainer Nate said:
make all the characters die at the end like in shakespeare
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No. All the characters will stay alive.

There might be a KO or two though
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What kind of story is that where everyone lives?

And thanks for spoilers.
 
Ghost Nappa said:
Bullshit. At least have one protagonist die.
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Fine. One of them will die.
Nabber said:
Rin Kagamine said:
Pokémon Trainer Nate said:
make all the characters die at the end like in shakespeare
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No. All the characters will stay alive.

There might be a KO or two though
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What kind of story is that where everyone lives?

And thanks for spoilers.
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I wasn't meaning to spoil it.
 
She's still dead. She was confirmed dead.


And I'm judging this on story standards, not video game standards.
 
I don't even know Portal so I can't do anything about GlaDos
 
In my strory there will be plenty of deaths. It's an Ace Attorney thing so of course their will be plenty or murder and dead people.
 
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