FictionPress Story: Trapped! (Chapter 1 Released! :D)

Well i thought its was good especially since you can read the story from someone view
 
Charlie Mulgrew said:
Well i thought its was good especially since you can read the story from someone view
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Truth is, that's really the only way I can write without it being extremely confusing or me having any way to continue.
 
I actually found it more confusing because you switched PoVs so often. Choose one or two characters and stick with them.
 
Sorry 'bout that. They're just in many places at once.

I'll keep that in mind.

I'll start working on Chapter 2 tommorow.
 
bulbasaur :P
but, perhaps this should be in another topic (sorry for mini-mod, I just want to get back on topic [and think these hilarious comics deserve a topic])
 
Stargatedalek said:
bulbasaur :P
but, perhaps this should be in another topic (sorry for mini-mod, I just want to get back on topic [and think these hilarious comics deserve a topic])
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they already have one

it's dead
 
Pokémon Trainer Nate said:
Stargatedalek said:
bulbasaur :P
but, perhaps this should be in another topic (sorry for mini-mod, I just want to get back on topic [and think these hilarious comics deserve a topic])
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they already have one

it's dead
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Then Necropost.

Back to topic. I believe this is about Rin Kagamine's story, not that series of comics.
 
Yeah. I'm focusing just a bit more on my Pokémon fic, since I'm almost finished with Chapter 1 of that.

But yeah, I'm still doing it.
 
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