Project 132 (beta)

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Re: Project 132 - PART 3: PLANETARY DEVASTATION HAS BEGUN

Travis Touchdown said:
no opinion on the saudy fight?
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it was pretty cool.

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8)
Travis Touchdown said:
also the lockhearts being darkness was a bit of an obvious nod that I'm surprised you didn't pick up before, lol
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eh, sometimes you don't piece things together until much later, and then it seems obvious

20/20 hindsight and all that
 
Re: Project 132 - PART 3: PLANETARY DEVASTATION HAS BEGUN

A man with bloody eyes
Dressed in white
Comes to visit
Every night

And he says
"I feel nothing
So I'm wondering
What does that make me?"

"Nothing," I say
"Nothing at all comes to mind."

"You can't understand yours," he accuses,
"How can you understand mine?"

"Nothing," I say
"Nothing at all comes to mind."
- Ruin
 
Re: Project 132 - PART 3: PLANETARY DEVASTATION HAS BEGUN

for anybody who feels bad about the state of their signups remember that i literally made 2257 into a warehouse
 
Re: Project 132 - PART 3: PLANETARY DEVASTATION HAS BEGUN

I hereby officially confirm that TabNalia is canon as fuck.
 
Re: Project 132 - PART 3: PLANETARY DEVASTATION HAS BEGUN

11:37 AM - Saponaceous: ' Nalia tenderly stroked the cheek of his partner, friend, and lover. "Soon, my darling pup, we shall be together in truth."
11:38 AM - Saponaceous: "But how can we possibly defeat Max? He is so jealous of what we two have, Lia, he'll do anything to tear us apart." Tabuu's lower lip trembled, his eyes wide and fearful.
11:38 AM - B): no
11:38 AM - B): why would Max he jealous
11:38 AM - B): Nalia's his grandson
11:38 AM - Saponaceous: "Not even Max II can deny our love, my sweet Tabby," Nalia crooned, so gently that tears sprang to Tabuu's eyes.
11:38 AM - B): no
11:38 AM - B): you stop that
11:39 AM - Saponaceous: They glittered like diamonds on his long eyelashes before falling, trickling over Nalia's fingers, delicate but strong, so strong, so able to hold him in his frailty and fear.
11:39 AM - B): stop
11:39 AM - Saponaceous: "Oh Nalia, how I love you!" and with the declaration Tabuu embraced his love, sobbing in earnest.
 
Re: Project 132 - PART 3: PLANETARY DEVASTATION HAS BEGUN

disclaimer: tabnalia will not and never will be an actual plot element, though the chemistry between the two characters is very important

the most you'll see is the same level of hate-flirt you've seen up to this point, but project 132 will not devolve into hot, gay sex between two conflicting protagonists with parental issues and a world to save from an unhinged grandpa

(I'm saving that plot for the porn parody)

tabnalia is totes canon though

i'm not actually going to put it into the story but you can pretty safely assume they get together and have gay mpreg babies after the end of it, i won't stop you
 
Re: Project 132 - PART 3: PLANETARY DEVASTATION HAS BEGUN

STILL HOW COME EVERYONE KNEW

IT'S NOT LIKE I HAD A CHAPTER WHERE TABUU STARES AT NALIA AND ADMIRES HIM FOR AN HOUR

THEY HATE EACH OTHER
 
Re: Project 132 - PART 3: PLANETARY DEVASTATION HAS BEGUN

Travis Touchdown said:
disclaimer: tabnalia will not and never will be an actual plot element, though the chemistry between the two characters is very important

the most you'll see is the same level of hate-flirt you've seen up to this point, but project 132 will not devolve into hot, gay sex between two conflicting protagonists with parental issues and a world to save from an unhinged grandpa

(I'm saving that plot for the porn parody)

tabnalia is totes canon though

i'm not actually going to put it into the story but you can pretty safely assume they get together and have gay mpreg babies after the end of it, i won't stop you
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This post is full of win.
 
Re: Project 132 - PART 3: PLANETARY DEVASTATION HAS BEGUN

Travis Touchdown said:
STILL HOW COME EVERYONE KNEW

IT'S NOT LIKE I HAD A CHAPTER WHERE TABUU STARES AT NALIA AND ADMIRES HIM FOR AN HOUR

THEY HATE EACH OTHER
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...kismesissitude?
 
Re: Project 132 - PART 3: PLANETARY DEVASTATION HAS BEGUN

[quote author=Chapter 5] A prisoner? I feel like he’s going to wine, dine and fuck me or something. I paused at that thought. That’d be fine, I guess.
Just as I finished that thought, a wooden door across from the foot of the bed opened. It was Nalia, still wearing his black robes and not naked. Am I moving too fast for him?
“Yo,” he said, “I just came by to check on you. You ready to talk to the King?”
“I’m not looking at your dick, man.” He’s going too fast for me.
He blinked his red eyes. “What? Get your ass up. Come on.”

[...]

“Oh, I wasn’t paying much attention until you said you wanted me.”
“...You and your friend took out your weapons and prepared to fight me.”
“I was looking at your body, not your mouth.”
“That’s...I’m not even going to comment. Just walk.”

[...]

“So...I had a part of you inside me?”
“Just...please, shut up.”
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And later: He pressed his wound against my mouth and I drank obediently, his blood tasting surprisingly tangy as it began to heal me. Blood isn't tangy, but a friend once told me that something else is. And while Nalia's part is mainly average rivalry-that-could-easily-be-read-as-BST stuff (Me and Nalia had actually made a second attempt at murdering each other a few days ago, but we had been caught and our fight was put at a standstill and we agreed to a truce. Technically, we weren’t fighting with intent to kill at the time, but then I stabbed Nalia and he got really angry and...yeah.), there's also this:

[quote author=Chapter 16] “Wait,” Tucker said, “Nalia’s a girl?”
“No!” he shouted.
“Damn.” Me and Tucker said, simultaneously.
Jeane made a noise while our parents chuckled.
Nalia was blushing furiously, in both the manner of aggressively blushing and being incredibly, incredibly pissed off. He buried his head in arms and went silent for a solid five minutes.
“That’s just cute.” Vanity said, elbowing him.
“Fuck off.” Nalia groaned. [/quote]
 
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“I haven’t killed anybody today, and I’m not going to have you bail on me!”
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These tough guy one-liners never get old. I'm not even joking.
 
Re: Project 132 - PART 3: PLANETARY DEVASTATION HAS BEGUN

he's okay

i like what you're doing with the wind powers, even if it is kinda OP unless he let's his guard down

we're already kinda in a world of OP though so that's okay
 
Re: Project 132 - PART 3: PLANETARY DEVASTATION HAS BEGUN

Dr. Javelin said:
kinda OP unless he let's his guard down

a world of OP
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god, if only you knew

also, Cobold's going to an enemy for Nalia to deal with- Nalia is kind of our deuteragonist, even though you hardly ever see things from his perspective

gonna be working on that from this point forward

also

do you know why the dove was there?
 
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