I have a new/avatar/sig/whatever.

new avatar and sig.
 
Pokémon Trainer Red said:
Started reading Homestuck, decided I like it, and made it my theme
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Not only what Lily said BUT FREAKING KEEP YOUR AVATAR FOR MORE THAN A DAY
 
I was going to make a MJ ' I am dissapoint' thread about that.
And the homestuck fad is stirring in its grave!!!
 
Pokémon Trainer Red said:
Started reading Homestuck, decided I like it, and made it my theme
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Oh look another me.

I'll call you "Mini-me".

Wait, Austin Powers already took that.

I'll call you "Mini-Ghosty".
 
Lily said:
Don't Fear said:
The "Son, I am disappoint" meme is stirring in its grave as well.

Also, why three exclamation marks?
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To add emphasis.
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Silly Lily, more than one exclamation mark just makes you look unprofessional and annoying. If you want to add emphasis, bold, italic or CAP your words, not add more exclamation marks.

Peter Sam said:
Austin Powers
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<3
 
Don't feel bad, I'm trying to be constructive here.

And look- you want to be a big-time writer, right? You're going to have to learn to take criticism. I know, I know- it hurts your feelings- and trust me, people used to be pretty harsh with me, too- but the only way you can get better at something like that is to acknowledge the problems and work to fix them.

Believe it or not, but I don't hate you. I think you're kind of...immature sometimes, and annoying, and creepy, and a fangirl- but I don't hate you. You seem nice, but you just have these layers of things I have trouble relating to/getting along with.
 
Yeah, I'm learning to take critics and rejection as I'm writing a book which I aim to send off to a big publisher.
 
I don't think you understand- your book will be turned down. There is absolutely no doubt in that sentence. I hate to say it, but all that this arrogant "I'm going to get myself published because I think I'm good enough!" isn't going to get anywhere. I read the book you had online- well, a sample of it- and it was terrible. If I was a publisher, I would jump out of my office window moments after gazing upon the first paragraph.

Whew, all that time without going into a rant was killing me.

But in all seriousness, you need help from other writers and critics if you want to get published. That is not a point you can argue, that is not a point you can defeat- because I've read your writing, and that kind of thing will never get published.
 
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