Typical Tragedy

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http://simple.wikipedia.org/wiki/Blood_type

I don't know what type I am, I think it's B+ or AB+. Not sure though.

Basically, certain blood types will resist mixing with other blood types. The O negative type blood will only mix with other O type blood, but AB positive can mix with any.

Blood type is important when someone has lost a lot of blood and they need a transfusion. Mixing blood types that won't mesh with each other is a very bad thing for the patient.

Not sure what the positive or negative means, though.
 
Don't Fear said:
I can't help but wonder what I'll write when I finish Typical Tragedy.
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You'll find something, no doubt.

Either that, or you'll be able to focus solely on Late Night with Tabuu and Mason.
 
Also, ch. 23 goes up today.

You'll love it. Also, my side projects never become main focuses- a rule of mine.
 
Don't Fear said:
Also, ch. 23 goes up today.

You'll love it.
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because it has meeeeeeee in it! <3

Seriously, though, you're churning out these chapters much faster now. Any particular reason?

(it's a good thing the quality hasn't gone down)
 
Inspiration boost.

There's going to be a fight scene in a few chapters that perfectly demonstrates what I wanted TT to be like from the start.

Yeah, I write some fight scenes ahead of time.
 

Conquest to the lover,
And your love to the fire,
Permanence unfolding in the absolute.

Forgivness is
The ultimate sacrifice.
Eloquence belongs,
To the conqueror.

The pictures of time and space are rearranged,
In this little piece of typical tragedy.

Justified Candy!
Brandy for the nerves,
Eloquence belongs,
To the conqueror.

You and me will all go down in history,
With a sad Statue of Liberty,
And a Generation that didn't agree.

You and me will all go down in history,
With a sad Statue of Liberty,
And a Generation that didn't agree.

I forgot to
I forgot to let you know that...

Justified Candy!
Brandy for the nerves,
Eloquence belongs,
To the conqueror.

Conquest to the lover,
And your love to the fire,
Permanence unfolding in the absolute.

Forgivness is
The ultimate sacrifice.
Eloquence belongs,
To the conqueror.

You and me will all go down in history,
With a sad Statue of Liberty,
And a Generation that didn't agree.
 - System of a Down, Sad Statue

In case anybody wondered what this story's title came from.

You could basically call it this story's theme song.
And it's gonna be the music for the last battle.
 
I was amazed. I opened my eyes and was about to tell Javelin my discovery-

Only to discover that Noir had left the floor a while ago and had gotten onto his MacBook while I had been distracted.

I sighed.

Some Sage he is.
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Computer addiction. We all have it.

*Thoughts as I read this chapter*

Okay, I'm teaching Tabuu to reach out with his senses.
yoda.jpg

You must feel the Force around you; here, between you, me, the tree, the rock, everywhere, yes.

Then we switch to the Gathering of Evil People.

How does Zanza see when it's pitch-black? Does he wear night-vision goggles or something? Anyway...

Oh look, a traitor. Odds are it's Pantaro (no surprises there) or Scarecrow (Murzon could be connected to him somehow, I think).

And then here we go to the battle and whoa Steve is amazing. I mean seriously, what a total boss. And I thought he couldn't get any better than his appearance in Resolutions.

Back to the party, and it looks like we've finally got a quest a winning sense of style a mission that looks pretty important.

But wait, before we get to start our mission, we'll likely meet up with Zanza since he said he was headed for TVTropes. Interesting.

All in all, wonderful. Especially because I'm Yoda now the story has a main goal in mind, Steve's appearance, and the battle that adds a sense of urgency.
 
Zanza couldn't see, they were just talking in a dark room to be all ominous and shit.

The next chapter's going to be even better, the chapter after that will be even better than that, and the chapter after that will blow your fucking mind.
 
Of course.

They all have to be great because I'm in th- well actually, the chapter that I debuted in was really not that amazing. But only because it was a bridge chapter where nothing really important happened.

(no I don't actually think that I'm the only reason)
 
Review:

The chapter in the beginning is very calm and yet descriptive with little description. The middle is widely described in info and battle and the end is nicely wrapped, especially with the message from Steve. About everything is in this chapter I say.

6.8/7
 
Dr. Javelin said:
And then here we go to the battle and whoa Steve is amazing. I mean seriously, what a total boss. And I thought he couldn't get any better than his appearance in Resolutions.
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I hope that isn't sarcasm? I wanted to make the replacement Wikipedia Steward and Steve as badass as I possibly could- after all, they're Stewards.

Dr. Javelin said:
They all have to be great because I'm in th- well actually, the chapter that I debuted in was really not that amazing. But only because it was a bridge chapter where nothing really important happened.
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There's going to be a few more chapters with the team learning the technique and you being all mentor-ey to Tabuu, but there will be some plot advancement as well. Once they make it to TV Tropes, it'll start to really kick into gear again.

David T. Darlton said:
Review:

The chapter in the beginning is very calm and yet descriptive with little description. The middle is widely described in info and battle and the end is nicely wrapped, especially with the message from Steve. About everything is in this chapter I say.

6.8/7
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People don't tend to like it when I drone on and on for too long with description, so I try to be minimalistic (while also not being lazy) and, for the most part, leave the description to the reader's imagination.
 
Don't Fear said:
Dr. Javelin said:
And then here we go to the battle and whoa Steve is amazing. I mean seriously, what a total boss. And I thought he couldn't get any better than his appearance in Resolutions.
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I hope that isn't sarcasm?
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The adverb "seriously" in my sentences means that it's not sarcastic. At least, I think it's that way.

Italicized words for me are either extremely sarcastic or extremely reverential (or movie/book titles, but whatever). In this case, it's the reverential version.
 
Don't Fear said:
Yay. :D

Just wait 'til you see Steve in action.
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YES

If he's better than the Resolutions appearance, then it's guaranteed to be amazing.

Steve nearly won the battle in Resolutions, but plot devices demanded that the protagonist win, so...
 
actually I would've killed him off anyways just to show how strong Evoltsul was


But yeah, he's going to be overwhelmingly badass in this appearance.
 
wait a second

Two people voted "Didn't read it." in the poll.

The only legit excuse you could have for that is if you're catching up on the older chapters; otherwise, then you seriously should read it for crying out loud.
 
Okay, I hate to go directly on the aggressive here, but I'm kind of pissed off on how The Real Life Wiki and BMB's Venture series are still more popular than anything I've ever written. Fucking seriously, how come nobody reads anything I write?
 
I'm not calling myself the best- things like that are in the eye of the beholder- but from a mechanical standpoint, my writing is better.
 
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