Typical Tragedy

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Chapter 25]Everybody turned to look at MBV said:
However, if Javelin is as powerful as the rest of the gang, then how come he doesn't also fight with them? Or will he?
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The group hasn't been fighting any bosses or things of the sort recently, and therefore I haven't been fighting with them.

That actually brings up another point: It's been a while since the group fought an Adva or a Mul.
 
More trolls will start showing up when they begin crossing the Spam Desert- since they've spent all this time in populated areas, they haven't been seeing much trolls, since Advas and Muls usually roam outside the cities.
 
Don't Fear said:
More trolls will start showing up when they begin crossing the Spam Desert- since they've spent all this time in populated areas, they haven't been seeing much trolls, since Advas and Muls usually roam outside the cities.
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Makes sense.

Also, for some reason the poll isn't working.
 
So this is what the e-mail from Chapter 18 was about. Who is this mysterious benefactor, and how did he know about Anton's treachery?

The Stewards' duel was pretty awesome. Actually, it was completely awesome. Catching the freaking meteors? Unbelievable.

Also, since Steve and Johnston won, how setback is the Wikian army? I'm assuming they have more Subs, and Rudnicki is still a major issue.
 
I think I'm gonna make a parody of this after it's finished. It's a great story, but there's some stuff that I don't understand about it (How is Porple a transformation? Why is there so much dropping of the f-bomb?). But I don't have the time and effort to write a story, so I probably won't. Anyway, Chapter 26 was good. One question, though: Is Javelin's last name a reference to Homestuck, or just a cool name?
 
In this, Steve is the Steward and Porple is a demon sealed into a sword he uses.

There's a bunch of fucks because I like to fucking use fuck, ya fuckin' get it?

Also, I first knew Javelin under the name "Jack Noir", named after the Homestuck character. When I was thinking up his name for this story, I combined "Dr. Javelin" and "Jack Noir".
 
Anyway. This chapter was pretty good but there were a few more typos than normally. And I just don't like it that Steve could repel those meteors like that.
 
Zanza is now the Emperor.

The Emperor]Good...good...your hate has made you powerful. Now strike me down with all of your hatred and your journey to the dark side will be complete![/quote] Anyways said:
MBV seemed to have a lot to say about the place, but he kept his mouth shut.
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lol.
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I seem to be spotting these as well. How odd.

I have quite a bit more that interested me these chapters, but unfortunately I'm running out of computer time so it'll have to wait. Phooey.
 
Actually, if you look back- Zanza was the cloud that Michael befriended while he was in the Rift. He isn't Dean's son- that is Dean's body.
 
Don't Fear said:
Actually, if you look back- Zanza was the cloud that Michael befriended while he was in the Rift. He isn't Dean's son- that is Dean's body.
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The plot thickens.

I have a nagging suspicion that I'm about to die. I think it's because Anton was making sure that I would come along on this mission, which probably means something horribly bad is going to happen to me.
 
Maybe, maybe not.

Hey, did I do a good job at showing that Tabuu was starting to lose it during the fight?
 
Don't Fear said:
Hey, did I do a good job at showing that Tabuu was starting to lose it during the fight?
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Yes.

It's hard to get angry at anyone on the team, because none of them have really done much that irks the others. It would have been more convincing, though, if there had been more evidence of underlying tensions earlier.
 
Well, there aren't any tensions- that's just Tabuu's envy and spite coming to the surface. Basically, he started hating them for things they didn't even do.

Ofc, he gets over it at the end of the fight, when he realizes what he's doing.
 
Oh yes I want to congratulate you on emulating his anger. It's not easy to realistically make someone freak out like that but you pulled it off.
 
I see people turn their heads and quickly look away...

OH GOD NO ANOTNO Y U BE TRAITIN'???? :'(

Got to catch up quick; these look like they'll be great chapters.
 
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