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So Tabuu is overpowered because he just happened to not.be there to be beaten the hell out of? Where the fuck are you even getting the idea he's overpowered? He's one of the weaker members of the team.
 
So far out they all seem to be equal in power.
 
wait a second

I didn't mean any of that post to be antagonistic. : /

I wasn't even trying to attack you at all. I don't want to know what's going to happen, that would spoil it. I'm just hoping that you didn't write yourself into a corner here.
Nosferatu Man said:
I didn't notice any sarcasm, but maybe Javelin is an even more cryptic freakshow of sarcasm than I am.
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I'm such a cryptic freakshow of sarcasm that even I didn't notice you could read that post as an attack post until now. : /

Besides, I was literally trying to understand how you planned to write yourself out of this, seeing as everyone we know is incapacitated.

Don't Fear said:
If they had fought as well, guess what?
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Didn't I already say that I knew the Subs could have trashed him...? Should I quote it for you?
Dr. Javelin said:
...the point that these Subs are practically unbeatable has been rather Anvilicious, considering everyone in the party nearly died in about five seconds.
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...not trying to start a flame war here, but perhaps you're the one who is overreacting? It looks to me like you're so against making yourself look overpowered that you're attacking me before I even said anything towards that topic.

Allow me to quote myself from earlier to prove my point.
Dr. Javelin said:
The only way to get out of this situation is to call the unbelievably awesome Anton and his sidekick Tabuu who is still figuring out his powers.
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Notice how I specifically didn't assume that it would be Tabuu who would rescue everybody.

Don't Fear said:
And you know what? You were finally going to debut in the next chapter. You still will, because you're an important part of the plot I'm working toward.
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Shweet, assuming you don't read this post as sarcastic and condemn me to death in some horrible way.

EDIT: You might want to settle this with me in PMs if you're still angry.
 
Oh, well...it's all cool now I guess. My bad.

Uh...bygones? Didn't mean to start a huge argument with you about it.
 
One more thing- the reason Rudnicki is so powerful is because he's in the Nega classification. When a Nega attacks a Wiki, the entire place goes into a state of emergency- that's how dangerous they are, by themselves. Rudy isn't the first troll to be like this- a long time ago, there was another one that came from Wikipedia.

He was Willy on Wheels, and the last thing Michael and Dean did before they disappeared (this isn't spoilers, I already said it in-story) was defeat him.
 
I couldn't go with "Jack Noir"- that'd be completely stealing the Homestuck name and people could get confused. I decided Javelin Noir- a combination of Jack Noir and Dr. Javelin- would suffice.
 
Don't Fear said:
Oh, well...it's all cool now I guess. My bad.

Uh...bygones? Didn't mean to start a huge argument with you about it.
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Psh, you should be happy that it's nearly impossible to offend me, and even when it happens I'm reset to normal by tomorrow. A weird but useful personality quirk of mine.

Javelin Noir is an awesome name. Seriously. I'm just shocked I didn't think of it first...

It seems my subliminal messages have laid off. Heh.

So, I'm guessing that being a Sage means that I'm more powerful than other users outside, where I have full access to the elements of water, earth, and wind, whereas indoors and in urban areas I'm rather weaker. A nifty balance.

Please tell me I have a spear, though. I didn't name myself Javelin for nothing...
 
Dr. Javelin said:
Psh, you should be happy that it's nearly impossible to offend me, and even when it happens I'm reset to normal by tomorrow. A weird but useful personality quirk of mine.

Javelin Noir is an awesome name. Seriously. I'm just shocked I didn't think of it first...

It seems my subliminal messages have laid off. Heh.

So, I'm guessing that being a Sage means that I'm more powerful than other users outside, where I have full access to the elements of water, earth, and wind, whereas indoors and in urban areas I'm rather weaker. A nifty balance.

Please tell me I have a spear, though. I didn't name myself Javelin for nothing...
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David T. Darlton said:
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I hate to do something this cliche, but YA RLY.

It's been part of my personality my entire life.
Don't Fear said:
Yes, you use a javelin.

Where do you think the plot's going to go now?
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You guys are going to wander the Wiki World gathering an army strong enough to combat Wikia?
 
This is going to become like a kung-fu movie, with you guys apparently getting training from me?

We find a MacGuffin that can defeat Rudnicki and the Wikian army and Zanza?

We find out that the leader of Wikia is under a curse from Zanza and we free him from it?

Come on, I'm running out of cliched plots here.
 
Dr. Javelin said:
Psh, you should be happy that it's nearly impossible to offend me, and even when it happens I'm reset to normal by tomorrow. A weird but useful personality quirk of mine.
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I do that too, except most things push my tolerance over snapping point very often. So my anger usually snaps free at any little thing, but to make me very angry and destructive is bad for everyone. I'm just more inclined to being hotblooded.
 
Review:

The chapter is incredible; I knew exactly how the environment looks like even though it has little description and I knew what the characters were going to do next. This chapter is very readable and enjoyable. Love it!

7/7
 
Also, I've noticed the direction you're taking with updating the main page about the story. It's pretty nice, in my opinion. Hard for people to get confused when you're putting a chapter-by-chapter summary up there. The character bios are rather nice too.
 
Don't Fear said:
For the lulz.
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SPOILERS: The blood type will eventually play a crucial role in the story.

...on a serious note, you might want to add whether the blood types are positive or negative, it's kinda important.
 
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