Can someone help me ?

I find the "oddly" a bit unnecessary, but it's okay to leave it if you want. I suggest this:

In the bonus rooms of Super Mario World, if the player hits a block on the left side with the cape, it will always be an "O".
 
Thank you very much! Now I am hesitant, I found this sentence repetitive and I don't know how to say that properly in English:

In Mario Strikers Charged, a robot from (of the?) the Super Team from Super Mario Strikcers makes a cameo appearance in the game's credits.

Can someone help me?
 
I'll help. Try this sentence:

A robot from the Super Team in Super Mario Strikers makes a cameo appearance in the credits of Mario Strikers Charged.

I've swapped the wording a bit, but this will make more sense.
 
Thanks for your help! I've just added a little something to the sentence. Does it makes sens?:


A robot from the Super Team, first seen in Super Mario Strikers, makes a cameo appearance in the credits of Mario Strikers Charged.
 
Dr Luigi Tm said:
Thanks for your help! I've just added a little something to the sentence. Does it makes sens?:


A robot from the Super Team, first seen in Super Mario Strikers, makes a cameo appearance in the credits of Mario Strikers Charged.
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yes
 
Thanks again!

And do anyone see something wrong in this sentence? Or is it all right?:

Among the 18 launch titles games for the NES in North America, Donkey Kong Jr. Math was the worst selling of them.
 
Try this:

Amongst the 18 launch titles for the NES in North America, Donkey Kong Jr. Math sold the least copies.

You might need a second opinion.
 
It's easier just to say this:

Donkey Kong Jr. Math sold fewer copies than any of the other 17 North American NES launch titles.
 
Good idea! Thanks a lot!

Now, for this one, is there anything wrong? Does it make sens? Which one is the best?:

A) In Scribblenauts, if the player types "Weegee", a plumber will appear, referencing the internet meme about Luigi from Mario is Missing!(PC).

B) In Scribblenauts, if the player typed "Weegee", a plumber will appear, referencing the internet meme about Luigi from Mario is Missing!(PC).
 
I'd have this

In Scribblenauts, if the player types the word "Weegee" in the notebook, a plumber will appear. This is referencing the internet meme about Luigi's appearance from the MS-DOS version of Mario is Missing!
 
Thanks a lot for your help! Now, I think this sentence is all right but I just need someone to confirm me if it is (or not)!:

The game photo montage in the center of the 2006 Nintendo Monopoly board includes a picture from the protoype version of Super Mario 64.
 
Merci beaucoup! C'est vraiment apprécié! :P

Now, this sentence was really hard to write under 400 caracters. This sentence has 397 characters but I'm not sure if the underlined segment can be said...? :

Only three Fire Bros. appear in SMB3: two of them are guarding the warp whistle in World 2, and one is in the first hand trap of World 8.
 
I'd rather see the underlined segment as and the other is found in the first, but 400-character limit won't let you, will it? Hmm well maybe you could get rid of the "Only" at the beginning of the sentence and then it should fit. So try this:

Three Fire Bros. appear in SMB3: two of them are guarding the Warp Whistle in World 2, and the other is in the first hand trap of World 8.
 
Yes! Thanks! That makes sens. :D

Now, here another problem, I would like to know wich sentence is the best:

A) In Mario Party 6, two Snow Bunnies can be seen sitting near the top of the Snowflake Lake board. They originate from Paper Mario: TTYD.

And for this one, do I need to say ''those'' or ''these'' ? :

B) In Mario Party 6, two Snow Bunnies are sitting near the top of the Snowflake Lake board. Those (these?) bunnies originate from Paper Mario: TTYD
 
Edit :

And is this sentence all right?

The Goomba House shows up on every single board of Mario Party 2. The player can’t access it or interact with it. It’s simply there.
 
A is fine in it's current form. B is also fine, but "These" sounds better than "Those".

As for the second sentence, it also is fine. Maybe remove the "It's simply there" or replace it with "It's simply cosmetic", but that isn't necessary.
 
Thanks a lot gentleman!

And for this one, does eveybody know what is a medal game (because I don't)... Is there anything wrong in that?:

Konami, the company that has made Dance Dance Revolution: Mario Mix, previously made Mario Roulette, an obscure Japan-only medal game.
 
Dr Luigi Tm said:
Thanks a lot gentleman!

And for this one, does eveybody know what is a medal game (because I don't)... Is there anything wrong in that?:

Konami, the company that has made Dance Dance Revolution: Mario Mix, previously made Mario Roulette, an obscure Japan-only medal game.
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A medal game is a type of arcade game, at the basic definition. "Konami, the company that has made Dance Dance Revolution: Mario Mix, previously made Mario Roulette, an obscure Japan-only arcade game" is basically what it says.

It's fine, to answer your question.
 
That makes sens! Thanks!

And is this sentence all right? :

Some treasures found in Wario Land II such as the Flute, the Rupee and the Power Glove come from The Legend of Zelda: A Link to the Past.
 
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