Can someone help me ?

Okay! Thanks a lot to you!

And now, I would like to know if I need to write the word 'was' in this sentence or is it to remove?

Diddy Kong (was) originally designed to be Donkey Kong Jr. by Rare but Nintendo felt Rare’s redesign for the ape was too extreme.
 
Ok, that's what I hoped! Thanks again :p

And for this one, I'm not sure about the ending of the sentence. I don't know how to formulate it so it can be more clear:

According to Toshihiko Nakago, the P in P-Wing stands for Paratroopa (And also for Patapata, the japanese name for Paratroopa).
 
Dr Luigi Tm said:
Ok, that's what I hoped! Thanks again :p

And for this one, I'm not sure about the ending of the sentence. I don't know how to formulate it so it can be more clear:

According to Toshihiko Nakago, the P in P-Wing stands for Paratroopa (And also for Patapata, the japanese name for Paratroopa).
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Capitalize the "j" in "Japanese", and lowercase the "A" in "and", then you're good!
 
Ok! Thanks! I reformulated it, do you think it is better like this? :

According to Toshihiko Nakago, the P in P-Wing stands for Paratroopa or Patapata, which is his Japanese name.
 
Cool :p Thanks!

And now, this one is a little bit tough because I need to say all that in less than 140 caracters. This has 139, but I'm not sur if the begining of the sentence makes sense:

In a USA Today interview, Miyamoto has said that Super Mario World was rushed in order to more immediately compete with Sonic the Hedgehog.
 
Yes! It works! Thanks again ;D

For this one, I would like to know if I should use 'on' or 'in' ?

Mt. Lavalava is a volcano on chapter 5 in Paper Mario and Mt. Lava Lava is the third level of the Wiggly Wilds in Wario Land: Shake It!
 
Make the changes in bold:

Mt. Lavalava is a volcano in chapter 5 of Paper Mario and Mt. Lava Lava is the third level of the Wiggly Wilds in Wario Land: Shake It!
 
Yes! Ok, thanks all!

Can anyone confirms me if there is something wronf or if it is correct? :

In the file select screen of Banjo-Kazooie, the sound effects that are coming from the Game Boy played by Banjo are from Donkey Kong Land.
 
I'd change the first word to "On".
 
Ok! Thanks! What do you think about this version?

On the file select screen of Banjo-Kazooie, the sound effects coming from the Game Boy played by Banjo on file 3 are from Donkey Kong Land.
 
Cool! Thanks :) ... Now I would like to know which verb should I use in this sentence ? Or how can I say that correctly? :

In Super Mario Advance, in addition to Mario and Luigi, Charles Martinet do the voices for Wart, Clawgrip, Tryclyde, Fryguy and Mouser.
 
Dr Luigi Tm said:
Cool! Thanks :) ... Now I would like to know which verb should I use in this sentence ? Or how can I say that correctly? :

In Super Mario Advance, in addition to Mario and Luigi, Charles Martinet do the voices for Wart, Clawgrip, Tryclyde, Fryguy and Mouser.
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Change it to does the voices or just voices
 
Ok thanks! So is it okay ?:

In Super Mario Advance, in addition to Mario and Luigi, Charles Martinet voices Wart, Clawgrip, Tryclyde, Fryguy and Mouser.
 
Yipee! Thanks again! And now, is there anything wrong in this?:

Unlike previous Mario role-playing games, Bowser does not have any lines of dialogue at all in Paper Mario: Sticker Star.
 
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