Can someone help me ?

Yohoo!

And now... Which one is the best ? :

Dr.Mario 64 is the only Mario game to be exclusive to North America on the Nintendo 64.
Dr.Mario 64 is the only Nintendo 64 Mario game to be exclusive to North America.
 
Dr Luigi Tm said:
Yohoo!

And now... Which one is the best ? :

Dr.Mario 64 is the only Mario game to be exclusive to North America on the Nintendo 64.
Dr.Mario 64 is the only Nintendo 64 Mario game to be exclusive to North America.
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Second one
 
Okay! Thanks a lot! And now, is this well formed?:

Super Mario Spikers is a cancelled Wii sports game that was developed by Next Level Games, It was a mixture of volleyball and wrestling.
 
Dr Luigi Tm said:
Okay! Thanks a lot! And now, is this well formed?:

Super Mario Spikers is a cancelled Wii sports game that was developed by Next Level Games, It was a mixture of volleyball and wrestling.
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the comma (,) should be a period (.)

otherwise it's great :)
 
Thanks a lot! Now, which one is better ? :

In the SMAS version of SMB, you can't pause with controller one when player two is playing. This was possible in the NES version of the game.

In the SMAS version of SMB, you can't pause with controller one when player two is playing, which was possible in the NES version of the game.
 
And is it :

There are a total of 104 visible Question Blocks in Super Mario Bros.

or

There is a total of 104 visible Question Blocks in Super Mario Bros.
 
Total's a singular noun, so you'd go with the second one.
 
Thanks a lot! Now, I'm not sure about the '' 's ''... Does it make sens?

In the Super Mario Kart's instruction manual, the picture for Mario Circuit 1 is upside down.
 
Drop the "s". And maybe italicize the words "Super Mario Kart" if it wasn't done already.
 
YoshiKong said:
Drop the "s". And maybe italicize the words "Super Mario Kart" if it wasn't done already.
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Or you could drop the "the" near the beginning but I would go with YoshiKong's idea.
 
OK thanks! But, unfortunateley, Twitter cannot italicuze words! But now it's ok!

Now, I'm not sure in this sentence is understable? Which one is the best?

In Super Mario Bros. 2 (USA), Pink Shy-Guys patrol a ledge, while Red Shy-Guys continue to move in a straight line regardless.

In Super Mario Bros. 2 (USA), Pink Shy-Guys patrol ledges, while Red Shy-Guys continue to move in a straight line regardless.
 
They both make sense, but the second one is more correct. Hope this helps!
 
Ok! Thanks ;)

And now, can someone tell me what is the difference between this? And is the anything wrong on this sentence?

For reasons unknown, the sound effect for when the Crystal King clones himself was changed in the Virtual Console version of Paper Mario,

For unknown reasons, the sound effect for when the Crystal King clones himself was changed in the Virtual Console version of Paper Mario,
 
The second one is more correct. Also remember to replace the comma at the end with a full stop (if you haven't thought about that already). Also this is another way of saying the sentence:

The sound effect which is heard when the Crystal King clones himself was changed in the Virtual Console version of Paper Mario for unknown reasons.
 
Oh yeah! You're righ about the comma. Thanks again! Very appreciated. I have another one!

In Super Mario World, Bony Beetles and Dry Bones have red feet, but those showed in the credits cutscene for the game had blue feet.

Does the word ''those'' is appropriated? Is the sentence all right?
 
Looks fine (I'd replace "showed" with "shown," but I don't think it's necessary).
 
I'd go with "shown", but that's just my opinion.
 
Thanks again! And do you tjink this sentence is okay?:

In several shots of the Imaginationland episodes of South Park, Mario, Wario, and Bowser can be seen among the residents of Imaginationland.
 
I've never seen South Park, but if Imaginationland is one word, then you might want to do this:

In several shots of the Imaginationland episodes of South Park, Mario, Wario, and Bowser can be seen among the other residents of Imaginationland.
 
Ok thanks! But there is only a little problem, it is 5 letters too long for the Twitter limit characters :-[

So I tried to reformulate the sentence, but I'm not sure when to use ''the''. Can someone help me?

In (the) Imaginationland episodes of South Park, Mario, Wario, and Bowser can sometimes be seen among the other residents of (the ?)Imaginationland.
 
The first time is correct, however the second one doesn't need to be there.
 
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