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Re: The Real Life Wiki

New Super Mario said:
Bones does have some good points Supremo though. Take some of those in mind
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Or do what ever you want either ways good
 
Re: The Real Life Wiki

New Super Mario said:
Brother Love said:
New Super Mario said:
Bones does have some good points Supremo though. Take some of those in mind
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Or do what ever you want either ways good
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OR actually take some of those things in mind and try to improve your story
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I'm just saying that he shouldn't get to warped up in criticism and that he should write how he wants to. He's writing a fan fic not a novel Brother New Super Mario
 
Re: The Real Life Wiki

Brother Love said:
New Super Mario said:
Brother Love said:
New Super Mario said:
Bones does have some good points Supremo though. Take some of those in mind
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Or do what ever you want either ways good
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OR actually take some of those things in mind and try to improve your story
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I'm just saying that he shouldn't get to warped up in criticism and that he should write how he wants to. He's writing a fan fic not a novel Brother New Super Mario
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But if you don't take it as criticism and as "Helpful hints" it can help your story be better. I mean I guess you do make some points that it's a fanfic and all.
 
Re: The Real Life Wiki

New Super Mario said:
Brother Love said:
New Super Mario said:
Brother Love said:
New Super Mario said:
Bones does have some good points Supremo though. Take some of those in mind
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Or do what ever you want either ways good
Click to expand...
OR actually take some of those things in mind and try to improve your story
Click to expand...
I'm just saying that he shouldn't get to warped up in criticism and that he should write how he wants to. He's writing a fan fic not a novel Brother New Super Mario
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But if you don't take it as criticism and as "Helpful hints" it can help your story be better. I mean I guess you do make some points that it's a fanfic and all.
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Yeah, I actually appreciate bones criticism. It will end up making my story better, which I agree, it can be. I'm thinking of ways to do that stuff, so Chapter 6 may be on hold.
 
Re: The Real Life Wiki

Can we just stop all the homstruck talk on this thread?Some people aren't fans of it like me
 
Re: The Real Life Wiki

This is not a Homestuck thread. This is a story thread. I'm going to get stricter on making pointless posts, starting now.
 
Re: The Real Life Wiki

Kizuna Kagesaki said:
grimAuxiliatrix said:
Kizuna Kagesaki said:
(IMO remember) I thought Chapter 5 was poorly done. I find it a nice idea to have the backstory on how he got the stone, but I think it failed. And to think that a magical stone from another world is all of a sudden guarded by a pharaoh who isn't necessarily described as being undead, actually it's the opposite.
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It didn't even say he was a pharaoh, so your last statement is incorrect.
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king + Egypt = Pharaoh
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Well, just because he's a pharaoh doesn't mean he has to be undead...

Kids these days... SO desensitized by television and movies...
 
Re: The Real Life Wiki

caligulasAquarium said:
Kizuna Kagesaki said:
grimAuxiliatrix said:
Kizuna Kagesaki said:
(IMO remember) I thought Chapter 5 was poorly done. I find it a nice idea to have the backstory on how he got the stone, but I think it failed. And to think that a magical stone from another world is all of a sudden guarded by a pharaoh who isn't necessarily described as being undead, actually it's the opposite.
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It didn't even say he was a pharaoh, so your last statement is incorrect.
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king + Egypt = Pharaoh
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Well, just because he's a pharaoh doesn't mean he has to be undead...

Kids these days... SO desensitized by television and movies...
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To answer to you Zero, YG is not the King of Egypt. He is the guardian..
 
Re: The Real Life Wiki

caligulasAquarium said:
Kids these days... SO desensitized by television and movies...
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Oh btw Zero since you seem to take every little comment like that as extremely offensive, that was a movie quote.
 
Re: The Real Life Wiki

grimAuxiliatrix said:
caligulasAquarium said:
Kizuna Kagesaki said:
grimAuxiliatrix said:
Kizuna Kagesaki said:
(IMO remember) I thought Chapter 5 was poorly done. I find it a nice idea to have the backstory on how he got the stone, but I think it failed. And to think that a magical stone from another world is all of a sudden guarded by a pharaoh who isn't necessarily described as being undead, actually it's the opposite.
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It didn't even say he was a pharaoh, so your last statement is incorrect.
Click to expand...
king + Egypt = Pharaoh
Click to expand...
Well, just because he's a pharaoh doesn't mean he has to be undead...

Kids these days... SO desensitized by television and movies...
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To answer to you Zero, YG is not the King of Egypt. He is the guardian..
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Who's YG?

@YoshiWaker: Your logic doesn't make sense and you know, I'm older than you kid.
 
Re: The Real Life Wiki

Kizuna Kagesaki said:
grimAuxiliatrix said:
caligulasAquarium said:
Kizuna Kagesaki said:
grimAuxiliatrix said:
Kizuna Kagesaki said:
(IMO remember) I thought Chapter 5 was poorly done. I find it a nice idea to have the backstory on how he got the stone, but I think it failed. And to think that a magical stone from another world is all of a sudden guarded by a pharaoh who isn't necessarily described as being undead, actually it's the opposite.
Click to expand...
It didn't even say he was a pharaoh, so your last statement is incorrect.
Click to expand...
king + Egypt = Pharaoh
Click to expand...
Well, just because he's a pharaoh doesn't mean he has to be undead...

Kids these days... SO desensitized by television and movies...
Click to expand...
To answer to you Zero, YG is not the King of Egypt. He is the guardian..
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Who's YG?

@YoshiWaker: Your logic doesn't make sense and you know, I'm older than you kid.
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YG is Yoshigo
 
Re: The Real Life Wiki

Kizuna Kagesaki said:
grimAuxiliatrix said:
caligulasAquarium said:
Kizuna Kagesaki said:
grimAuxiliatrix said:
Kizuna Kagesaki said:
(IMO remember) I thought Chapter 5 was poorly done. I find it a nice idea to have the backstory on how he got the stone, but I think it failed. And to think that a magical stone from another world is all of a sudden guarded by a pharaoh who isn't necessarily described as being undead, actually it's the opposite.
Click to expand...
It didn't even say he was a pharaoh, so your last statement is incorrect.
Click to expand...
king + Egypt = Pharaoh
Click to expand...
Well, just because he's a pharaoh doesn't mean he has to be undead...

Kids these days... SO desensitized by television and movies...
Click to expand...
To answer to you Zero, YG is not the King of Egypt. He is the guardian..
Click to expand...
Who's YG?

@YoshiWaker: Your logic doesn't make sense and you know, I'm older than you kid.
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Oho but as I said, it's a movie quote, and my point stands that a pharaoh doesn't necessarily have to be undead.
 
Re: The Real Life Wiki

Kizuna Kagesaki said:
@YoshiWaker: Your logic doesn't make sense and you know, I'm older than you kid.
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Snobbish quote is snobbish.

You shouldn't brag about being older as if that will make you right. Look at Supremo. He's only what, 11? And more mature than half the users here.
 
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