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[Daniel Dyce]

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Wait, since when was YoshiGo the guardian, I thought he just retrieved the stone?

@Yoshiwaker: The undead or not dead pharaoh, I was implying that scene wasn't really descriptive and left a ton of questions open. Also, I said your logic doesn't make sense because your basically implying that all ancient Egyptians are undead.

No, YoshiGo was just the guardian of the stone, Yoshidude needed to get past him. Go back to look if you want to.

Ahhh, those two yoshi's got me confused, it was the lack of description in that chapter that did the job. But why would YG be considered a major villain if he was killed in the same chapter?

He wasn't killed, he was just severely injured. He will appear again in the story later with more of a major role.

Must of forgot it, or lack of description.

I just finished reading Chapter 6 and I have to say overall of the story... no offense but it's a bit dumb. Users are randomly place in situations like they're use to it and I find not believable that you manage to get in a cab go to the airport, go though security and fly in an airplane. In reality (what a coincidence :P ), NONE of those services will be given to you because it is illegal to have any sort of contact with an extra-terrestrial.

Reality means nothing it's a story

Exactly. And anyway, I would've ridden on top of the taxi or cab :P

It's like your story, it's not realistic.

I also kind of have Writer's Block write now..

Don't double post

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Your not allowed to double post with in 3 days of the last post

 

[UltimatePetey]

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Wait, since when was YoshiGo the guardian, I thought he just retrieved the stone?

@Yoshiwaker: The undead or not dead pharaoh, I was implying that scene wasn't really descriptive and left a ton of questions open. Also, I said your logic doesn't make sense because your basically implying that all ancient Egyptians are undead.

No, YoshiGo was just the guardian of the stone, Yoshidude needed to get past him. Go back to look if you want to.

Ahhh, those two yoshi's got me confused, it was the lack of description in that chapter that did the job. But why would YG be considered a major villain if he was killed in the same chapter?

He wasn't killed, he was just severely injured. He will appear again in the story later with more of a major role.

Must of forgot it, or lack of description.

I just finished reading Chapter 6 and I have to say overall of the story... no offense but it's a bit dumb. Users are randomly place in situations like they're use to it and I find not believable that you manage to get in a cab go to the airport, go though security and fly in an airplane. In reality (what a coincidence :P ), NONE of those services will be given to you because it is illegal to have any sort of contact with an extra-terrestrial.

Reality means nothing it's a story

Exactly. And anyway, I would've ridden on top of the taxi or cab :P

It's like your story, it's not realistic.

I also kind of have Writer's Block write now..

Don't double post

...

Your not allowed to double post with in 3 days of the last post

Never mind.

 

[ShyGuy27]

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Holy crap what a quote block.

 

[Zero777]

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Stop quote mountaining! Anyways, this is a story that sort of stress the importance of it being different that it took place in the REAL world, but whatever it's your story.

 

[UltimatePetey]

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Stop quote mountaining! Anyways, this is a story that sort of stress the importance of it being different that it took place in the REAL world, but whatever it's your story.

Well, some people don't like things, some people do.

 

[yoshidude99]

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C6 was ok I gave it an 8

 

[UltimatePetey]

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Got off writer's block, I have an idea for Chapter 7.

 

[Dr. Javelin]

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Your not allowed to double post with in 3 days of the last post

Actually, you're allowed to double post if you're updating something.

 

[UltimatePetey]

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Sent Chapter 7 in to editor, may be released today.

 

[Dr. Javelin]

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Edited.

 

[UltimatePetey]

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CHAPTER 7: A MAN STACHELESS HAS BEEN RELEASED!

Criticize constructively, comment, rate, and have fun reading! Don't forget to subscribe...

 

[Yoshiwaker]

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Um, I guess the fact that I'm 13 makes up for that... :P

 

[UltimatePetey]

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Um, I guess the fact that I'm 13 makes up for that... :P

Yeah, I made all users a little older in the story. :P

 

[Yoshiwaker]

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I'M HAVING THE TIME OF MY LIFE!!!

 

[YoshiGo99]

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u guys went to jail!

 

[Yoshiwaker]

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I'M NOT GONNA STOP FOR ANY COPS! I'M HAVING THE TIME OF MY LIFE!

 

[New Super Mario]

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Good Chapter. I give it an 8. How does this have 49 pages with only 7 chapters? Seriously guys, stop spamming this thread

 

[UltimatePetey]

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Good Chapter. I give it an 8. How does this have 49 pages with only 7 chapters? Seriously guys, stop spamming this thread

I know. Guys please stop spamming. This is a place for story talk, not spam talk.

And NSM thanks.

 

[New Super Mario]

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Good Chapter. I give it an 8. How does this have 49 pages with only 7 chapters? Seriously guys, stop spamming this thread

I know. Guys please stop spamming. This is a place for story talk, not spam talk.

And NSM thanks.

I like the part where there in the car and Yoshiwaker was driving. That was kind of amusing

 

[UltimatePetey]

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Good Chapter. I give it an 8. How does this have 49 pages with only 7 chapters? Seriously guys, stop spamming this thread

I know. Guys please stop spamming. This is a place for story talk, not spam talk.

And NSM thanks.

I like the part where there in the car and Yoshiwaker was driving. That was kind of amusing

LOL. I wanted to add that to add in a little bit of funnyness into the story. Not all seriousness.

And yes, funnyness is not a word.

 

[New Super Mario]

Re: The Real Life Wiki

Good Chapter. I give it an 8. How does this have 49 pages with only 7 chapters? Seriously guys, stop spamming this thread

I know. Guys please stop spamming. This is a place for story talk, not spam talk.

And NSM thanks.

I like the part where there in the car and Yoshiwaker was driving. That was kind of amusing

LOL. I wanted to add that to add in a little bit of funnyness into the story. Not all seriousness.

And yes, funnyness is not a word.

I think you ment "humor"

 

[UltimatePetey]

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Good Chapter. I give it an 8. How does this have 49 pages with only 7 chapters? Seriously guys, stop spamming this thread

I know. Guys please stop spamming. This is a place for story talk, not spam talk.

And NSM thanks.

I like the part where there in the car and Yoshiwaker was driving. That was kind of amusing

LOL. I wanted to add that to add in a little bit of funnyness into the story. Not all seriousness.

And yes, funnyness is not a word.

I think you ment "humor"

Yeah.

 

[yoshidude99]

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Yoshiwaker is funny in C7 really funny so I gave it a 9.

 

[UltimatePetey]

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Yoshiwaker is funny in C7 really funny so I gave it a 9.

LOL thank you.

 

[YoshiGo99]

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So do I, i give it a nine